All Comments on 'Family Friend'

by SlightlyDivine

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW!

That was HOT! I'm still panting. I hope you add another chapter and soon. I would love to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A family friend

Your father's friend needs to be made into a daddy.

marklionmarklionover 15 years ago
Daughter Gets what she wants from old friend

That was a great story which I hope becomes a series.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Loved the theme . . .

. . . enjoyed the story. I would have liked a little more background and a bit more build-up before the hot finish. Thanks for a good read.

OstrobogulousOstrobogulousover 15 years ago
next chapter

I could barely contain myself while reading this one. I would love to see more chapters.

Harper2Harper2almost 15 years ago
More than slightly divine

Much much more than "Slightly Divine" Your story was mind-blowingly sexy.........well done

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