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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very Nice

i enjoyed the story. Thanks, Steve

Scorpio44Scorpio44about 16 years ago
Inticing..

Except for a small error in writing... changing from 3rd person to 1st then back to 3rd... I enjoyed it.

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