All Comments on 'The Order Ch. 00'

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KatLadyKatLadyover 15 years ago
Where's the rest?

Good start--keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More Please!

I love the whole paranormal/interracial combination. I wish stories like this one were easier to find. Love it! I am intrigued and I can't wait for the next chapter.

AlydenAlydenover 13 years ago
Cool!

Getting interesting

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

impressive beginning!!!

Sheenas_MusingsSheenas_Musingsabout 12 years ago
Very Intriguing

And you've written so much. I'm going to end up flying through this series if the rest of it matches up to the first chapter. The characters are strong and individual in traits and voice. The piece is easy to read and flows from scene to scene very well.

Intelligent, driven heroine, demon assassins, an underworld mafia and the promise of romance. I Like!

Thanks for writing

shortydeeshortydeealmost 12 years ago
Glad To Be!!!!

Iam glad to be rereading this story. I hope it is as good as I remember it...lol

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