All Comments on 'You're the One for Me Ch. 04'

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sacrificedangelsacrificedangelover 15 years ago
LOVE IT

Love it love it love it!

I swear you leave the reader able to have a laugh along with your characters, feel their frustration, and their lust. This story is brilliant!

GlosUKGlosUKover 15 years ago
Fantastic

Brilliant chapter. PJ xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
bring it on

as the lady said.bravo to an easy to read,fast paced tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
fave line

"he was about to put it down like an all-star..." LOVE IT!

canndcanndover 13 years ago

You have to feel bad for Austin and Ben getting interrupted every single time they are having fun. They really should remember to get into a room with a locked door!

kattoy120vkattoy120vabout 13 years ago
soundproofing too

The tension is delicious...

You can almost taste the frustration and arousal.

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