All Comments on 'Calling His Bluff'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sorry

Just not for me.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
She didn't get any satisfaction from either men

One of the guys should have went down on her and gave her some satisfaction, especially since both men had an orgasm. You just have to take care of a woman who will go that far to push her husband's buttons on his fetish.I think you need to write a story where the wife gets fulfilled, and that she finally agrees with her husband, that in a controlled situation, that extramarital sex would be enjoyable,especially if the new lover had a big penis....Rich

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioover 15 years ago
Not believable.

50% for fairly good writing, 0% for the plot. Firstly, our wife heroine Sheila gave in awfully easily. She basically had sex with Dan while hubby Jon watched. I'm not using the Clinton definition of sex, by the way. She was supposedly dead-set against doing anything with another man but succumbed with no argument with the excuse she was calling her husband's bluff . . . lawyers like to win arguments, not lose them. Secondly, there was nothing in her character to suggest she was looking to go extra-curricular. In fact, the story was too short to really develop any characters to the extent that the reader could really understand and/or identify with them. Actions have consequences and if there are one or more chapters, I would be interested to see if the story could be better developed in a more realistic way. Thanks for writing.

sirhugssirhugsover 15 years ago
great build up

would have liked more story. it was hot, but ended too quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Anticipation?

Maybe...oh yes!

She didn't have sex, she would be rubbing her legs together to help with the itch that built up so...what do you think? Yes, she would fantasize, and while she was picturing the events of the past few minutes, she would masturbate to an explosive and overwhelming orgasm!

As she recovered, her thoughts would begin to think about the what ifs' of other possibilities, maybe her husband had a good idea, what about some of the men she met while away on business...some of them were hot...hmmm - Maybe? Maybe YES and suddenly a totally earthshaking orgasm and she wasn't even touching herself! Oh yes, sex was going to be euphoric from now on!!!

2nd Chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
nice work!

Very well written - too many awful writers on this site, but this was very well done!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Get with the program

Tell the wife she is few to play and you as husband will be loyal and happy with seconds.

This is now the way it is and should be.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Indeed

OLD GUYS CAN'T GET A HARD ON WITH OUT DEVIANT STIMULATION. PURE CUM EATING CUCK BOY SHIT OF CLOSETED BETA FAGS.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Maybe

Maybe Fred and Wilma will pop by later to make the bed rock.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 4 years ago
nope she'll just turn into

another whore and her minions.

gingerhuntergingerhunterover 3 years ago
So much for a lawyer needing discretion

I'm certain everyone wants to be represented by an attorney who likes to suck strange cock and get facials while her cuck jerks off and adds his jizz to the mix. No one can give a better oral argument than her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

once a whore always a whore . you know i feel bad for adele the singer ,she hookup with a black sport agent , he's going to get his hands on her money knock her and leave her for another white woman . and leave her a bunch black kids

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