All Comments on 'Camping Ch. 02'

i love this storie at first a though it was just that one chapter but am so glad plz plz keep uploadin more chapeters cant wait xx

i love how intriguing and sexy without any intercourse.

another chapter(s) to this story :) im getting very very excited actually. But now, im getting sad.... she cant remember?!?! Thats awful! i hope she remember soon, and go to her mate!

Great story as long as it's not over. Please keep writing so I can find out how it ends.

Please keep writing this story!! I need to know what happens!

Im really liking this story.

I hope you continue

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I can't wait to read more of this story. Please keep writing.

Love It!!!!

i really loved your story! but there has to be more! they are mates they have to be together! please write more soon!

Please hurry I can't wait to read more!!

Oh man...please continue with this story, i can't wait to see what happens!!!

This chapter was so great i cant wait for the rest of the story!

I really like the way you had her dream of Xander and the others. You opened up alot that you could keep writing about...past them finding each other you could write about this pack. I like how you conveyed her feeling something missing despite her lack of memory. I would like to know who the other wolves were who first fought over her. Obviously they weren't from this pack. Also her dad probably wouldn't have left her so quickly if she hadn't talked in all that time...but I am glad he did listen to her at least. It is a good story. Looking forward to the end.

This is not a full chapter do you know how books are written . This is not a full chapter Look it’s a good story but. You need to write a full chapter which even for a short story should be a longer nit to mention chapter 1 & 2 are riddled with misspelled words Don’t want to discourage you .. but I must sound agitated cause you got the makings of a great story but You don’t seem to know how to write. Perhaps. Write it out completely then edit it before posting I hate reading a great story only to have it constantly abruptly end with out it actually going anywhere. It’s like starting to have sex and then your partner just getting up walking away and leaving you there unsatisfied