All Comments on 'The Closet'

Taking into account those that fully admit to incest stories to those that don't, they have one thing in common: DREAMING about incest does not make it so.

You get a ZERO for you really need to know how to properly categorize your stories. Now if you come up with chapters later that actually have incest, STILL does not make this story an incest story.

This story was a total waste of my time!

I take it to be a closet of sexual restraint that he is coming out of, so does that mean he is going to nail his mom or sister? I think he should seduce his sister, and take her back to the time they were in the hall outside of their parent's bedroom. Just think what he would feel if he and his sister were in the hall outside of his bedroom. Watching some man in the act of fucking his wife,'who is said to look like his mother', while he and his sister are fucking in the hall. That would be coming out of the closet in style....Rich

Personally, I had expected a much more explicitly dark story; perhaps a bit of S&M. I was relieved that this was not the case (though others were likely disappointed). This was definitely an incest story, though; masturbating his sister counts, methinks.

Was an okay read, nothing too fast, nothing hard to decipher, and a good introduction to a new series. I feel for you that the bottom poster... motherfucker-something-something, name wasn't too important... completely missed the part where it said you were being jerked off by your elder sister whilst voyeuristically gazing upon your parents fucking. Such a shame that people don't actually read the story, then get pissed when it doesn't match what "THEY" feel a particular story should be like. Buddy, lighten up, or at least go jerk off elsewhere. Nobody likes a piss-ant.

it seems strange that when his sister suprised him out side the parents room that he didn't yell most people would have also it seems strange that when sis asked him to tell her what was going on that he didn't tell her to see for herself since you said they had a love/hate relationship and if thier relationship was as bad as you said there is no way he would allow her to play with his cock keep it atleast sounding realistic this isn't the fantacy area as bad as this chapter was i don't know if the rest is worth reading

Wow, a Latina falling for a 5 and a half incher? get real asswipe

Very gripping up to half way. But maybe that was because I was tired.

I did think his sister would end up more cruel to him.

DID soak my gusset.

However, Stephen's cock was very skinny: "...it made up in its girth which measured almost two inches..."

Girth means around the perimeter. A two inch girth translates to just over 5/8 in diameter {across}. Two inches in diameter is a nice size.