All Comments on 'Taking Her'

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double dsdouble dsover 15 years ago
Wow!!!!!!!!

This story has me totally wet. Very well written. Erotically charged.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ravished!

I am wet. My nipples are hard. Thank you so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oh oh oh OH!

That was hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
So hot!

This is exactly the kind of story I love. Your details and descriptions are excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
OMG

Hot doesn't even begin to describe it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

So hot!! I'd like to see another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Short Story!!!

I'm truly impressed that you could say so much in so few words! Congratulations!!!

phantom123phantom123over 4 years ago
She didn't want to want it - but she did.

Love stories like this. Would like to see the video!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Umm, Yeah - Not Likely...

Infantile. Problematic - not a hope in hell of happening. Insipid.

What happened to the husband? He just disappeared? Walked away? Vanished?

Then why did she continue whoring with these fucks?

Does anyone really believe two rich, businessmen would put their lives and fortunes at risk by treating women in this way - effectively extorting and raping? When they can simply hire escorts, whores, even their own wives??

Incongruously stupid and ridiculous.

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