All Comments on 'Linda's Birthday Party'

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marklionmarklionover 15 years ago
Wow that was a great start!!

It would be nice to see you continue with her birthday party and throw twist into the story about the two strangers that had sex with her after Tom left. Like maybe her brother had his way with her or one of his friends was with him.

fanjerryfanjerryover 10 years ago
cucumber

linda was no virgin after the cucumber

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