All Comments on 'You Can't Succeed Without Trying'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story!

This is one of those fairly stort stories that just make me long for the sequel.. :-D

Irish MisterIrish Misterover 15 years ago
Great Story

The premise and the events were unlikely... but WHO CARES? Very entertaining, a real pleasure to read! <nudge-nudge><wink-wink> The way you developed the action, and the explanations you created were perfect for keeping the story moving and (this) reader engaged.<BR><BR>

Thanks!

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