All Comments on 'Colleen Ch. 01'

I loved this story! It is very well written and wildly erotic. Believe me, I am achingly hard right now! ;) I am also looking forward to more from you on this series.

Thanks!

He has more will power and restraint than I would have! The follow-up chapters can be sooooo hot! Please hurry!

I'm anxious to read about this couple's exploration of Amsterdam. Good writing and quite interesting.

On the one hand I want her to go as ape shit crazy as she says. I want her to experience everything and really be his slut; Amsterdam's slut. Having been there myself I really love Amsterdam so I'm looking forward to some bit of travel log narrative here too. That city just invites this sort of debauchery so yeah, I want to see her lose herself in it. On the other hand though I don't want to see this dissolve into nothing more than a never ending fuck story where she simply bounces from one depraved scene to the next. Like bad porn, those stories quickly become boring. I find myself scrooling through the sex scenes of those stories, looking for the next bit of "story" in the story. I'd like to see you continue on with some "story" here too, if you know what I mean.<p>

Great start though!

This is a great story. HOT. Good character development and a great build up around a plausible plot. Keep up the great work! Hurray.

Good start, this can be a very good story. Looking forward to the follow-up chapters. Please don't make us wait too long.

more please

The story intrigued me right from the beginning, young woman consumed by "life"'s turbulence, harboring inner desires that have long been neglected. I admired her courage to ask for what she so long desired and thus the adventures begin.

By the time I finished chapter 6, I was over the edge and now re-reading again, to enjoy my travels along with her in this adventure.

Ah Amsterdam, a dream of mine to visit as well.

A great start to what promises to be an excellent story. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. I trust you to provide an abundance of sexual situations that will be a pleasure to read and fantasize about. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.