All Comments on 'Here to Stay Ch. 09'

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WatercrazyWatercrazyover 15 years ago
beautiful ending

I loved it. I cant wait for your next story!!!

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonover 15 years ago
Love these two

Ive loved this series the whole way through. Your writing is phenomenol and your charcaters are so adorable. Hope I'll be reading more from you soon.

blunajanablunajanaover 15 years ago
Perfect

I loved your Story and I can't wait for new ones. So please submit the chapters as soon as possible. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wonderful

Really enjoyed the whole series. Thank you for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Spectacular!

You have no idea how brilliant your story is! It was simply breathtaking. Your writing ability is superb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hhhmmm

i thought emmette was going to get back his sight. how did he saw the script in the hospital anyway?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
What a great story.

This was a wonderful and sweet story. I loved the characters and the storyline with all the internal & external challenges they had to overcome. I hope that sometime soon you will sumit yet another of your stories. It's been almost a year and a half since your last posting. Please share with us again.

cpm09cpm09almost 14 years ago
Wonderful!

I loved every chapter. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Gorgeous story!

feelinromanticfeelinromanticover 13 years ago
hidden treasure!

i cant believe i missed this when it first got posted, but better late than never..very much better in fact. Ive been so addicted that ive read it all in one night. Thank u for a great story :-)

alexandra36alexandra36over 13 years ago
Truly beautiful!

The story made me laughed, smiled, cried, and everything else in between. Astoundingly beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
???

Tres bien. BEAUTIFUL story. Really tugged on my heartstrings.

TopBitchKTopBitchKalmost 13 years ago
BEAUTIFUL

When I started reading this series of stories, I wasn't sure I would enjoy reading them. Boy, was I wrong. It was a joy to follow the characters and the story line. I was just a little disappointed in the last chapter though, it seem a bit rushed and too short. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Aww

Such a süß story. Very sweet. Maybe a little close borderline sappy/kitschy/cheesy for my tastes BUT I enjoyed it very much.

hk47enclavehk47enclaveabout 12 years ago

Really enjoyed this series.

Keep up the great job.

:)

FuckLikeAPornStarFuckLikeAPornStarabout 12 years ago
amazing

you have such a way with words, you pulled me into this story. I really felt fpr the characters and i wanted to cry along with them every time something bad happened, it tugged at my heart strings that much

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

its a pity he didnt get his sight back after the accident.? thats what i expected...it would have been a nice ending...however it was a wonderful story and i loved every bit of it..

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 11 years ago
Lovely

Very well written I was hooked from the first chapter to the end, I do agree with Dinky though it is a pity that the car accident didn't shock his sight back but a beautiful, romantic story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I know it's twee but can't we have another chapter or two and a Hollywood ending where he gets his sight back?

lonleylucaslonleylucasabout 11 years ago
i agree

id love to see him get his sight back

bythewxbythewxalmost 11 years ago

I like that he doesn't have his sight. For me, it makes the story all the more romantic. Excellent job :)

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
I was really hoping

that Emmett would get his sight back because there was no medical reason for him to lose it.

But great story anyway :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story!

Except I was sure the accident would restore Emmetts sight. :(

baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Sight

The part about no medical reason for his sight to be gone led me to believing he would get his sight, at least in part, back. The fact that he didn't was a bit disappointing but I 100% realize that all things don't necessarily have that happy of an ending. Overall I very much enjoyed this story and I thank you for submitting it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I DID EXPECT THAT HIS SIGHT WOULD RETURN AFTER HIS ACCIDENT BUT I MUST SAY I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE OF YOUR WORK ..BIG J

kmillerk1kmillerk1almost 9 years ago
AHHHHH

I was hoping for his sight to return as well, but a beautiful story with a happy ending, :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Even I thought emmets sight migjt come back

Awesome story

Loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love love love this story!

I’ve read this story too many times to count and love it more each time! Thank you!

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