All Comments on 'Tears in a Dry Land Ch. 02'

I've really enjoyed the first two parts of this and am curious to see where it goes. Please, keep writing.

functionally, I think you have the best writing technique of anyone I've read on literotica (and I read a lot, and a broad range, of stories/authors). You truly write like someone who has studied and excelled at the technique.

the story so far is interesting... wondering where it will take us (altho this chpt was quite short)