Absolutely Positively loving these two!
These characters are great. Camille is very likeable & Matthew is interesting, not to mention sexy as hell! I'm soo loving the gradual build up of this story. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!
please stop with the short stories you are killing me
Dude! you are killing me with the long waits and the short chapters! I know life gets in the way of writting, but girl, this is torture! I love these characters and the way you write, so please please please try to give us (your adoring, faithfull fans) a little bit more.
What an interesting tale you've woven so far with Matt and Camille. I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I hope the wait for the next chapter isn't too long. Oh and never apologize for using real cities with fictitious surroundings, it makes the story more believable...I do it all the time. Great work.
Each chapter brings a little more detail of who they are. This is a perfect foundation for an emotionally driven story which unfolds amazingly sensuous scenes as you offer 'tastes' of the attraction each feels for the other. The sexual temperature is rising and I can't wait till Camille realises she needs to turn the air conditioning up!
Thank the lord you gave us another chapter! I thought you forgot about us! I love this story and you are doing an amazing job keep it up! please dont make us wait so long for the next chap.
Everything seems natural.
This is so sweet. Matteo is a dream man. Are there men like him still? i would love to meet one.
your writing is good. keep it up. :) more chapters please.
I loved the scene with the sister hearing her comment on him running.
Now, she fell asleep with him there?
What is wrong with this girl? Man, she doesn't get much dating in, gets this hot guy around her and falls asleep?
Yeah, baby! Go FSU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh, and the story is absolutely amazing!
Who can't love this hottie???? He's the man ...our boy Mattie!!! Sweet and so very thoughtful.
Oh gosh why couldn't I have an Italian God like him. Hmmm.... :) I'm really loving this series...good job.
OMG! another chapter out of the park. BTW question - What does "Miele" mean, I might have missed it,
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