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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
AHHHHHHHHHHH!

What a great story! Loved it right from the beginning! I want a 'next time'!!!!!! Please continue on with this one and add more chapters!

WhitePythonWhitePythonover 15 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thanks for your feedback! I will definitly continue this story line.

shadowsslaveshadowsslaveover 15 years ago
Oh Wow...

AWESOME story! I loved the storyline. Not like the 'usual' stories of a man going in for the kill on a newly single woman. Love your writing skills. It was very erotic and yet sweet all at the same time. I agree that this story could go on a bit with more chapters. It has the potential to become a really great ongoing series but if you decide to leave it as is....it'll still be one of my new favs. Thanks for sharing it :-)

WhitePythonWhitePythonover 15 years agoAuthor
Story Progress

Thanks again for the feeback. I have started writing Chapter 2 which I am just going to title Jenn Again, rather than Jenn Chapter 2. I'll let you know when I've posted it and its been approved.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 15 years ago
Boy meets girl; girl breaks up with previous boy

and so it goes...A simple (but nice) start of a romance. BTW, what happened to Jenn being uptight?

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