All Comments on 'Sister's Home Movies'

Most long stories such as this get boring, but this one didn't. Great job.

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Good job, well done!!!

One of the best stories I've read ever !!!!

Birth control is not 100%...You should continue with brother getting his sister pregnant!

Very well done. Kept me on edge the whole time. A little mystery, common sense and the sex was great. Nice job

Looking at the story initially, I thought that it was going to be too long, but after reading it in its entirety, I realize that I was terribly mistaken. The lead up was truly needed, and I think that it was very believable overall. Super erotic as well. I just wish that more stories form this genre were written as well. My favorite incest stories run more along the maternal end, but this one was fantastic.

Really enjoyed this story and especially the long build-up to their ultimate sex act. I also appreciate that the author submitted this story in its entirety rather than in multiple parts.

Excellent story. Well written and very carefully developed. I had this fantasy growing up although I didn't have a sister. It would have been cool to have an older sister to teach me about sex. Other than the slip with Susan/Maryanne early on, it was a fun and highly entertaining story. Looking forward to more!

Perhaps the best I've ever read in this genre. Congratulations! Pieater

...it was beginning to feel like she was having second thoughts about her husband. I was almost hoping for that too.<p>

Excellent story. I often skip six pagers (which is partly why I try to avoid writing them) but I've read some of your stuff before so I had a feeling this one would be worth it. It was.

I'm not the poor dumb cockold hubbie overseas fighting while my loving wife is home fucking her brother, till dad joins them. nice.

I think the love between the brother and sister was predominately the true focus of the story.I will have to say that the sex between the couple was extraordinarily explicit, and very exciting. The story made me want to see the two loving people have sex and discover that they were really meant for each other. Thanks for the excellent story ......Rich

Yeah, right. Quite the opposite; you couldn't get much better without killing Mark off, getting her pregnant, and having them move somewhere anonymously, "role-playing" as husband and wife! That, my friends, minus the grammar, spelling, and punctuation issues, is worthy of a story in any incest-related sex publication! Fiction or not! All that it's missing is the porn-facial! Oddly, my security code for this post was 9111 (or 9/11/01)! Honest!

the build-up was perfect

Great, great story. The build up was awesome, well drawn out and the scenes were very hot. One of the best stories I've read in a long time.

it was okay. nothing special but a good read.

Hey GLAD........it was the "poor dumb cockold hubbies" idea, remember? You must have been an only child, or did your sister reject you?

It was a nice story, just didn't enjoy the present tense. It makes stories clumsy, although not enough to make me stop reading this one. Good job!t

I was stuck on the concept at once, and I knew I was in for a doozy after having read your whopping four-part mind-control themed story.

From conception to execution, a very well planned-out and organized piece. I, too, was leary about the present-tense style, but I rarely see it, and you pulled it off well.

All in all, very well done.

As usual you bring everything to the table. I look forward to reading your stories. It seems about every three months, so I know when to come around. I certainly wish you could get them out quicker, but I wouldn't want to mess with your style and your strengths. Excellent!!!!

Your stories never disappoint, and this one didn't either. It definitely sound set up to have a sequel or two, and if so, I know I'll read them. Personally, there are series' that I prefer, and this story will likely fade from any spotlight it has, but it was a good story nonetheless.

Personally, I can't wait to read your next Neuro submission story (assuming there will be one, right?).

Happy days.

Just awful!

to tell how really good this story was!

Very nice story, but for 5 stars you have to continue this story, her brother must cums inside her without any birth control... he have to get his own sister pregnant of his child!

He loves her, he wants her become his child's mother. And she wanna be mother of her brother's children. They become lovers, he cums inside her every time is possible, and as soon as possible she gets pregnant of her brother's child.

Just the perfect amount of buildup, suggestiveness, etc....To me, the buildup is the most important part of the story, if i just want sex i can go to any old porn site, but foran involving story that not only draws you in but ....well, you know. Keep up the good work, aand shame on you, the people who posted less than 100%'s. this deeserves to be in the top 10, its much better than many on the top list.

I'm not sure if this is the best story I've read; I'd have to read the stories back-to-back , and I'm not sure what the other contenders are. This is certainly worth more than a "5". As most other readers, I hope you will continue the story. I don't care for the pregnancy angle; I HOPE you can pass on the anal sex [I find it disgusting]. I really liked when he came in her mouth and she held it so he, and the camera, could see her mouth full of cum, and then watch her swallow it. You've got foreshadowing for her to leave Mark, based on what he's asking her to do in the videos. In fact, you have so many things you could do that you could make a novel of this, and I think most of your readers would thank you. So I'll start now and thank you for what you've written and what I hope you will write in the future.

Better than 110%... Maby another chapter with what she teaches him and if they call an end to it when Mark gets home, I would seriously hope that they make time for each other...

ratings should go higher than 5, that seems mediocre, which the story wasn't!!

5 points, 10 hard-on's

encore!

maybe mark gets his dick shot off!!

From go to whoa this was a fantastic story. Believable characters and a nice long story with substance. Exceptional work samslam. I just wish I could write this well.

So very, very good. I never had a sister, so I grew up being deprived and poorly educated. Now that I am in my second childhood, I shall endeavor to get my masters' degree. Thank you for stirring my fantasies.

Amazing. It was just what I was looking for. Just enough detail. Dude below is right; I could go to any old porn site to see naked chicks. Its all about the build up and you Used enough detail so I could picture the whole thing in my head.

Great job I will definatley be looking into more of your stories.

Dude...That was an awesome story.

excellent. great build and a sense of people caring about each other.

and the sex was hot.

This one takes careful character development to get to the BOILING HOT JUICY SEX Little Bro is needing -- as is his horny grass widow sister. Both have solid respect for each other, so we are in for a tantalizing ride. By the time her young husband gets back from Iraq, we're going to have to get another girl's bed & bod for the boy. Excellent storytelling!

Please don't stop now...it's just now getting really HOT!Please don't leave us hanging.

To use an Army expression "OUTSTANDING". My wife sent me some video downrange... Wish I had someone I could trust to keep the home fires burning.

Wow, that was really a GREAT story i LOVED it.

Great build-up, I loved the change of pace as the sister decided to go with her gut and I had the most wonderful laugh as I skipped a line accidentally, which resulted in her telling him that he will become an extraordinarily talented cockhead... :-P

Effing magnificent... that's all I can say.

This story was absolutely fantastic.

Putris na yang gagao na yan!kaswerte naman!Translation:Goddam that asshole!what a lucky fuck he is...

That's one bedtime story I'll read over and over again.

Completly! Utterly! Absolutly! Undoubtably! By Far! The best on Literotica!!! Loved the way you wrote it and the plot was fantastic! Great way to "write" or lay out the story. Your by far the best author I've seen since I've been reading on Literotica, which is been quite awhile. Please, Please, Please write a continuation!!! I'm begging you!!!!!!

Jake :) aka. Bunkwadman2

A wonderful erotic story. One of the best I have read.

What better than every teenager's fantasy of having sex every night? Interesting, no unique, plot line. Too bad so many of our GIs are overseas and not able to share sex with their wives. A great story!

This was amazing! One of the best stories I've read on here by far. I usually don't bother leaving comments, but I just had to. Absolutely amazing!

wow... What more can you say to an amazing story like this than... wow! Great story hope to read many more similarly amazing stories.

This is a masterful romantic romp -- absolutely super, juicy, hot, loving sex! The plot is well designed and wonderfully described. It also shows how badly we treat our young people by sending them into distant, drawn-out wars. Man oh man, but a gorgeous young woman on the prowl can set real fires! Her brother is learning a ton, so I hope he'll be able transition into a solid, loving, passionate marriage and leave his big sis to her ;ife's love when he gets home.

ONLY TWO THINGS I CAN SAY ABOUT THIS IS "WOW" AND "HOT"

I AM AWAITING MORE

Put her on the pill....speed up the time (a year or two later) and then put Mark on a second tour of duty.

This was my story, but the time was the was the start of WWII.

I was luckier tho, I had two sisters.

I'd love to see a continuation. Mark's behaviour seems very strange. I think you could easily expound on that. Perhaps have Maryanne discover that Mark has been sharing her videos some time after he returns, and when she confronts him about it he could use the knowledge of who her photographer (videographer?) to blackmail her into performing more and more lurid acts. Eventually Maryanne has had enough and goes to the Geek for help. Cue the Geek's genesis from Geek to man as he confronts Mark and somehow uses his technological-know-how to save the day.

In all seriousness though, I do hope you write a continuation.

I can see where you might have them actuale get so comfurtable fucking that they do send some to mark mabey with the geeks face mask?

A sequel would be just terrific. Hasn't Maryanne promised to teach the geek all that there is to learn about fucking ? What happens ?

Great story.

Great plotline.

Chapter 6, though, was a major letdown.

You've got something really special going on here if you can continue.

Writing well is difficult, but consider yourself encouraged.

-r

PS: There's such a thing as "friendly fire."

I would have given this one a 10 if allowed...

what a awesome story i have read it 3 times it is the best i have every read.i(we)want more to this story can't wait to read more.

The geek part I've got! Thanks for a great read.

Great story. Well told.

Oh my goodness. This story is absolutely PHENOMINAL. Epic action, incredibly well written. The plot is well constructed and solidly laid out. The pace is almost perfect, by the time they consumate the arrangement you are practically begging for it. It doesn't rush it, it is a fabulous piece of literature. If I were to judge it in a competition this would surely be a solid first place. It is an..for lack of a better word phenominally amazing, intensely thrilling and just plain mind blowing story. Congratulations. I shall revisit this again and again, simply to enjoy the story. It is so gripping I didnt even realise I was past the first page till I was clicking onto page 5. Wow, just plain wow. I havn't seen work like this since my own tales upon this site. Fantastic job all round. Congratulations, it is truely a work of art.

Also, just to add a final thing. I agree with the comment about friendly fire. That would be an almost perfect way to further this story series.

this was a freaking awesome story i almost passed it up but man am i glad I didnt thanks you

WOW!!! That was the best story I've read on Literotica since I've starting reading them and I've read alot of them. I hope that you have written more. Please continue to entertain us!!!

One of the best. Realistic setting, believable story line, considered dialog and hot sex; what more can you ask for? Oh yeah, Ron's internal thought processes that add an element of humor. Top notch!

I'm over 50 and I've read more than my share of "erotic" stories and books dating back to high school. That was one excellent story, samslam!!! One of the best I've ever read online. You should be extremely proud of it.

Hey Samslam!! that was an amazing story!!! i am looking forward to a next instalment if there is one!!!

One of the best i have read on this site!!!

thanks !!!

Great story. I've read a lot of your stuff, and this is definitely one of my favorites!

this is great! I dont usually comment on these, but man this was just awesome... I'll definitely be reading more of your stuff..

this was great i have never commented but this was extraordinay

By far the most seductive and enticing story I have read on Lit. Keep up the amazing work, Eager to read more of your stories.

excellently paced, brilliantly described.

keep on writing more like theses please :)

i enjoy reading this type of story i get bored with anything else

There is nothing I would to change the story. The pacing was good. There was a surprise element with the sister having him masturbate before her to get even. I liked that they were questioning the motives of the husband and decided not to send the video. I could see it being used as blackmail say for a divorce. One she had intercourse, her head was clear and she told him to erase the tape and that was perfect plot point.

I liked that she let him move in with her which was a good arrangement for the two of them. If she saw other men, it was not a good thing particularly for a teacher. You could have taken the story to the return of hubby but you didn't. My guess is that would be a messing thing when he returned.

An impressive piece of writing. The characters were likable and believable. It was smooth and had good transitions. I wouldn't want to sleep with any of my sisters, but if she well mine... well...

Thank you, I really enjoyed reading this story, especially the description of the brother desiring his sister and looking at her body got you in the right mood and pulled you in the scenery somehow. Almost the whole story I wasnt paying attention to anything else than my screen. There were just a few parts where I was realizing that it is only a story.

Thank you very much and please give us more! (I think Ill get addicted to it)

Fantastic detail, just like you're other taboo stories

I read this story, and it sent me back to my military days. It was peacetime, just after the Vietnam War ended, but the isolated remote tours continued. I was asked by a friend of mine with orders for one of those tours to stand duty as his surrogate with his wife. It was a first for me, and I thought about it for a couple of days before I agreed. It worked out extremely well until he returned. To this day, I exchange emails with his (now) ex-wife, as well as the three children who still call me, "Uncle." They are all adults now, with families of their own, and were ignorant of just how significant a role I played in their family for over 15 years, until as adults, their mother admitted to the relationship. Then mom told me that she'd told them. ... And I'd thought myself beyond surprises.

Just thought you'd like to know that the circumstances described are less uncommon than many think, and the thought processes involved are pretty much exactly as described in your work.

This was a fun read. One of the best I've seen on here....

What a lovely idea. I really enjoyed it.

I was so excited,I wanted more

and this is definitely one! excellent dialogue,,,well paced,building to a most satisfying ending,,,,more like this please!

keep going man that was intense

send us some more

Fantastic Job! IT made me extremely horny. Ironically, I have a husband named Mark. Time for me to fuck him now ;]

omg that was amazing O.O I'm glad i read through that whole thing now im horny as fuck

that was an amazing story, im so horny, i wish my brother was such a good little brother.

Don't ordinarily read or like incest stories but your skill and craftsmanship made it a worthwhile read. Two O's on the orgasmeter

Excitingly believable

Great Story. Nice build up. Keep the stories "cumming"

The best story I will ever read...dam no one can beat this story.

Awesome

loved it. great pace and well written, made an unbelievable premise into a very believable story. awesome.

Love how you ended this one but hopeing that you will countiue the story line

This is the best one i had ever read.Waiting for a sequel.

if i read it right this must discdribe personal experience - a very lucky guy who will write further as the couple grow through life - not threatening anyone.

you are assured of a growing thankful audiance

Whata great and hot story. Nice work! ^__^

Wow!

First of all, when I open up different stories here on Literotica, I often end up closing down the ones that are like 4 pages or longer, just because they are often so tedious, both in writing and in action.

This one, however, was a whole different ballgame.

=)

Something must have caught my eye already on the first page, because I decided I wanted to read it. And apparently the writing on the first page was good enough, because I came by the end of it! But again you proved your skill as a writer, because most stories I would have just stopped reading after "they've done their thing", but I just wanted to find out what happened next and so I kept reading it, all to the end. (And was turned on several times throughout the rest of it, as well.)

Your vocabulary is also really excellent. I'm not a native English speaker, but still know a lot of English and in my younger days used to swallow up dictionaries, just intrigued by words. And you used them all skilfully, no naive language or stupid spelling or writing in general, which I come across fairly often on this website.

Very well done just in every single way!

=D

This is the best story that I have ever read! It has great grammar, and all words are exactly where they are supposed to be. I'm not usually into incest but this was awesome! I am really looking forward to other stories and you definitely have enough skill to write a compilation or even a book

Absolutely top notch writing. The story is long but keeps you interested and wanting more right to the very end, and then you want even more! I love erotic story's that are written in a realistic way with a good build up to the main action and you more than accomplished that. This was one of the best erotic works I have read in some time. You should definitely write more.

Funny story of my own; I read this while at work and when I finished I realized I had got so turned on by the writing that my erection had leaked massive amounts of pre-cum. I had an enormous wet spot on my pants. Awkward leaving work but well worth it. Thanks.

Thank you very much! One of the best stories I've read so far. Very good. Thanks to you I've got a wet tummy! :)

Keep up your good work!

Cheers!

What a refreshing change of pace! The stories on this site are usually so poorly-written that the fantasy is instantly ruined, but that's not the case with this one. It's obvious that this person paid attention in English class. Just next-level stuff.