by fantasy69
This should be under the rubric, "Lesbians", not incest. I was hoping to read a continuation of the original series, but this was a dissapointment!
Thank god, thought you might have stopped writing. This is the BEST story on this site, I look foeward to new chapters all the time. Please keep up the brilliant work.
I have followed this story carefully, you are definately one of my favorite authors. However the subject of the story has deviated. Those who want that path look to the beginning and enjoyed the few trials and tribulations but now it is becoming something else. I hope you find your way back to the subject. It doesn't mean it can't be interesting, just on topic.
Dear fantasy69,
I love this series. You've done a wonderful job in developing the characters so vividly.
BUT, I DON'T THINK THAT YOU LIVED UP TO YOUR FANS EXPECTATIONS IN THIS CHAPTER.
It's understandable that you can't keep having Kate make love to Tommy and Kristy all the time. obviously, we need some other characters around Kate so that the sexual relationship between Kate and her children doesn't get too boring. However, you should be very careful when introducing new characters.
In my view, the relationship between Kate and Betty is not very interesting. Of course that's only my personal opinion. I'm looking for a brilliant chapter revealing sexual feelings of Adam towards Kate. I'd say he's going to fall in love with Kate. Interestingly enough, he's never been attracted to Raven. For this reason, Raven feels jealous of Kate. Adam's intense feeling (which is covered under his calm or indifferent face) combined with his unbelievably enormous sexual ability makes Kate thirstier than ever...
have been checking this site weekly for your latest submission. As ever your writing is of the highest possible standard and i am extremely grateful for your work - keep them coming man..
Great chapter, but should have been combined with Chapter 14 to be Incest/Taboo. Keep up the great writing; in my opinion, probably the most erotic story on this website.
Thanks for all your work, one of the best mom-stories out there. Would love to see future chapters involving her son again..
glad to see that ur absence hasn't softened your skills!
love the story! and I loved the teasing even more! can't wait to read 14!
AND LET ME SAY WHY: THE POSITION SHE WAS, BOUND AND GAGGED, HOW COULD SHE ENJOY THE DILDOS IN HER BODY.
SORRY, BUT LET HER GO BACK TO HER FAMILY, SOOON
This chapter did the trick... after reading page 3 my mom finally asked me to fuck her. Thank you. She is now all mine and ready for use as I want. that's what I always dreamt of, She is still sucking me while I write this :D
why is it that the greatest stories leave you hanging
I would be willing to send vyou money if you bring on some more chapters with betty turning into a voyeur and finds out about kate tommy and kristy's incest and gina and wants to watch
The horendous spelling in your work really detracts from the enjoyment one gets from the great story line and characters you have developed. THEN and THAN are not interechangeable learn the difference, there and many other places as well.
back yard (backyard)
We were forced to wait before they began. (AND AFTER TOO, UNLESS THEY BUILT POOLS BY MAGIC!!!!) (UNCOMMUNICATIVE STATEMENT!!!!)
loosing the desire (losing)
shorter then I (than) (2)
site of my pussy (sight)
house cleaning (house-cleaning)
aureoles (areolas)
crotch less (crotchless)
tea shirt (T-shirt)
foot rests (footrests) (2)
Betty's naval (navel) (2)
finger tips ( fingertips) (2)
back side (backside)
between Raven and I (me)
body guard (bodyguard)
go ahead (go-ahead)
tippy toes (tiptoes)
Wife (wife)
extra curriculum (extracurricular)
god (God) (6)
arm rests (armrests)
going to (to have) put some lube
laying there (lying)
told her (to) move
shaft of freely moving (to freely move) (VERY CLUMSILY WORDED!!!!)
worm it's way (its)
lay (lie)
inline (in-line)
work out (workout)
new found (newfound)
exiting (exciting)
All those guys in Betty's sex shop, maybe 35-40, including some couples and the story ends with pages and pages of just Betty and Kate getting nasty? I mean it was hot but saw it going in the direction of a massive gang bang on Kate, Betty and Raven... Oh well. Keep up the great work. :