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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoyed it!

This isn't a category that I usually read but I enjoyed this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good

Very Very Good...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
very very good story

Awesome, and the wife loved it even moore than me. Keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good read.

Good writing. Nicely paced and detailed.

woodrowsmithwoodrowsmithover 15 years ago
wasted talent

very well written. your talent as a writer is wasted here.

marklionmarklionover 15 years ago
Great Story!!!!

That was a great story that you wrote. One other comments that I read today about you wasting your time writing this type of story is a joke. You are good writer and your talent is shown in the way you wrote the story. From the start to the finish and it was a love story. Please keep writing

cageyteecageyteeover 15 years ago
Wow! Are you really a "beginner"?

Is this really your first attempt at writing? I generally love "happily ever after" stories even though I sometimes don't write them myself and I sure as hell loved this one. Aside from the subject material, you write well. Your command of the language is far superior to most writers on this and a number of similar sites (me included). I am looking forward to seeing your next story. By the quality of the writing I suspect that may be a while in coming but I'm looking forward to it anyway!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Arrogant ass-hole

I gave up after page 2. It's very hard to retain interest in a story in which the hero is such an arrogant bullying ass-hole.

the Ct. Yankee

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I gave up.

I quit reading after the first page, sorry.

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioover 15 years ago
A bit long and tedious but also pretty good.

Well-written and good read. Enjoyed this a lot. Scenes were erotic.

salubriousmesalubriousmeover 15 years ago
WOW!!

I almost stopped reading, and then remembered some of the hottest stories set the scene and build up to the actual sex fests and boy I'm glad I kept reading. Dirty, sexy and hot! And it covers all themes! 10/10!!

AverageBearAverageBearover 15 years ago
Glad I stayed with it!!!

Don't worry about the negative comments - they gave up too soon! This turned out to be a wonderful love story. I can see where those who quit thought it was headed, and they would have been right (at least by my taste). However, you took it in a completely different direction, and all kudos to you! Besides the refreshing content, your craft is well-honed. You have a gift with the language. I look forward to your future submissions!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent

I think this is absolutely brilliant. You are clearly an intelligent and erudite individual. I don't think I have ever had a tear in my eye from reading something on this site, so that came as a surprise towards the end. I thought the pace was excellent, attention to detail fantastic and your writing style reads as relaxed, informed and erotic. You should be very very proud of this. Thanks very much indeed for posting. ST

ddpmanddpmanabout 15 years ago
Good Reading

Nice plot; plenty of sex; and a happy ending. What more can you ask for. Did wonder what happened to Rebecca. Leave that for another day. I really enjoyed you efforts - thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I Liked This

Sorry I missed this earlier but I am glad I caught it now. A very good story from start to finish. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A+

Loved it!!!!!!

MetrevilMetrevilover 14 years ago
Very Good

A very good story; definitely liked the reluctant lawyer angle of it. I noticed while reading that the piece could use a bit more editing to touch it up, but overall a decent job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
At Last!

After many months, I am finally starting to find stories with length, attention to detail and relationships that are believable. I love a story that causes me to deposit tears on my keyboard.

I would like to find out what happens with Rebecca. She is intriguing. This might be a person who allows you to write a spin off or a continuation to this already great story. The only faults I could find were minor, and mostly grammatical such as spelling, and the use of words that sound the same but have different meaning. I also found some of the conversation was confusing. Who said what to whom?

Keep up the good work and don't rely so much on the "spill chick" function.

I truly loved "Educating Shannon".

BallsOfSteelBallsOfSteelover 14 years ago
Better than porn. 110%

Holy fucking shit! Loved it long time. haha

Like many others here, absolutely loved Rebecca. Good choice leaving her out at the end, because Rebecca's part of the firm/family anyway. Let them live happily ever after. No need for a continuation or even a spin off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excelent.

Sir,

Your creation is one of the most entertaining,ewer!!! Your depth of perception and insight of human nature is phenomenal! You are a true Master of Words. Please keep us entertained. Thank you.

Ross Smrek

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A satisfying read...

...on so many levels.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Job!!!

Great story!!

Typo Fu MasterTypo Fu Masterover 14 years ago
Just. Fucking. Awesome.

I wish I had the words. That was great. Excellent story, excellent descriptions, excellent sex. Even had a happy ending. 5 stars and worth more. Well done!

skywriterxxxskywriterxxxover 14 years ago
It's not easy...

...to find a truly GREAT story these days...but this one is one of the best I've seen, ever.

Very well done, honest believable story. Nicely written, good use of the English language, an enjoyable read.

Congratulations!

Thanks for sharing, and have a great day!

~Sky~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
GREAT LOVE STORY

lovely it should be classified as romantic rather then non-consent. such thing happen in love. one of the best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Simple Awesome

I approve of this story *thumbs up*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Possibly the best story I've read on this site

Good show!

CSD2CSD2about 14 years ago
i'm afraid to read anything else you write

might make me not read anybody elses work. great job.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteabout 14 years ago
Almost credible....

....and very well written.Thank-you

PrincessJezebelPrincessJezebelabout 14 years ago
A lovely surprise!

At the beginning, I thought this might be just another "getting revenge on the ex" story, albeit a very well-written one. But it became so much more, truly an awakening for both of them! (And for Rebecca, as well :) I secretly hoped for the romantic ending, but didn't think I'd get it. And then, even that was not only believable, but HOT! Great job!

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 14 years ago
Well written story, interesting and erotic

I really liked the twists and turns of this story. The sex scene with Rebecca was hot. These characters are well developed enough to merit a second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Educating Shannon - And the Reader

I was tatally entertained by all the elements of your story-- sex, intimacy, plot, happy ending, sophistication, emotions . . .

Thank you for a great read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Well all I say to those that gave up early

and didn't finish this story, you missed a good one. I had a feeling about them getting together but wasn't sure. Great reading, super writing. You're one hell of a good author. Thanks for the read.

ZKHANFLZKHANFLalmost 14 years ago
Dont Marry Her

Sorry, Erik would be making a fatal mistake if he takes her back. She messed with him once already. Why have her break your heart again. Use her like the whore she is, and whenever she needs his legal services again, fuck her silly.

Great story though, but he is making a big mistake getting back with her again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent Story

It was the third of yours I have read and I want to say I am very impressed with your writing skills, both technically and creatively. As to this story, some very interesting twists, extremely well written sex, and a quite realistic ending in terms of your protagonist's emotions. Personally, taking the story line forward based on my feelings, I cannot see it working in the long term as a marriage, though a more open relationship might work. Well done. Michael

zed0zed0almost 14 years ago
HOT!!!

X Wives (girl friends) can make great fuck buddy's, but you don't have to marry it.

RonRWoodRonRWoodover 13 years ago
Fantastic

Other commenters have praised it plenty. I concur. One of the best erotic stories I have read...

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 13 years ago
Incredible!

As HOT a story as I've read in a long time. Well written and damned near perfection. Thank you.

0649d0649dover 13 years ago
pretty hot story

I have read similar stories with more harsher endings. While they do me when I'm feeling down, I actually dislike the ones where the girl ends up as slave or is damaged too badly. This is something that I like much MUCH more because it doesn't involve rape, and the girl could have walked away, even if it meant losing her cause. The story has a good ending, and I get the feeling that the protagonist can live without guilt at the end and he can have his girl too. I am getting the feeling that even though he was rejected by her at the start of the story, he still held a candle for her, and that's why he worked so hard to become a success and didn't date any other girls. All the more power to him! It is a good plot for some soft revenge; thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
awasome

awasome, fantastic very very well written...need more stories from you ...

fregenfregenover 13 years ago
Very hot story. Very well written but...

Dating for 5 years, engaged for 1 year and she disembowels at her cousin's graduation party? I guess I am still wondering why.<P>

He actually showed a great deal of restraint while exacting his revenge. I suppose she was the "great love" of his life but take her back?<P>

Thanks for sharing.

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
Excellent tale

One of the best stories I've read on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

thumbs up mate

juanwildonejuanwildoneover 13 years ago
All rise!

Loved it. Nice work for the Non/Rel genre. Sexy as hell.

Can't quite figure why some bailed out early - go figure.

TheLovelyLickerish1TheLovelyLickerish1over 13 years ago
Super!

If I thought hubby would wake up after a long day at work -and with a long day ahead of both of us tomorrow- I would... well, that would be material for my own story!

wdonaldwdonaldabout 13 years ago
Five stars

You're the only author that I have given continuous five stars to. You're one hell of a writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Don't marry her.

She'll lose the alimony.

Great story.

BigJohn601BigJohn601about 13 years ago
A revenge that any dumped lover could love......

I think they both got their monies worth. Great story and very well written as usual.

PassKeyPassKeyabout 13 years ago
Excellent

I enjoyed it very much and gave you a five. <P>

PK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Of course take her back on her Word

She is absolutely trustworthy ... NOT. duh.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
FIVE STARS

It's was amazing!!! So hot!!!! That's how u want things to go!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Plenty of hot sex...

Just what we like. I appreciate your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
4 stars for the story

Everything was brillliant except the ending which was a fucking disappointment !! I mean seriously!! I wanted more out of rebecca's character and Shannon couldn just turn angel!! I needed more anger, MOre lust and more aggressive emotions!! Good story just not Good enough for five stars

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 12 years ago
^__^

Interesting story and very hot sex scenes. What else can we ask for? 5 stars and thanks for this amazing story. ^__^

Scorpio44aScorpio44aover 12 years ago
Was that education for the Masters or a PH.D.?

I'd say Masters and the PH.D. is to cum after they've been together for a while. One question remains for me... When does Rebecca move in with them?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Haha. Thats my fantasy too... Though I aint letting my ex screw with my mind again. Would do her again though!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wow just wow

Wow it had an amazing story to it and kept me drawn in, the subtle reappearing of rebbeca kept me wonderin and wanting to read more and i felt the ending was great , id actually pay to read this. please write more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

what a way to go. well laid out script.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
There are some exceedingly good writers here -

When one like Scorpio has that kind of praise for another writer - you really need to know the story must have been very good.

I agree and think Rehnquist takes the time to develop very penetrating plot lines and execute them well (no pun intended)

I wish we had more and more recent works -

Thanks very much -

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow!

That was an amazing story. Thank you. Please write more(:

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
While I can sympathize

With him wanting to get payback on his ex-fiancee and stretching his ethics to do so , protecting a man who subscribes to kiddie porn and is arrogant enough to be an actual child molester... protecting this man just to squeeze more money out of him is beyond fucked up.

It's also concealing evidence of an ongoing felony, and sure as hell is not covered by any client confidentiality privileges.

After that quality review on family law you wrote elsewhere, one that included a good deal of poking fun at writers who show complete ignorance of the law, it seems like you'd want to do some basic research to make sure your own is up to snuff?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
One of my favorites!

I really enjoyed this story and have read it multiple times! Great job how you make us dislike them both at first then turn it around to feel for them and I ended up loving both main characters!

S-DesS-Desover 11 years ago
Good pacing...

I really enjoyed how much time you took for Shannon to come around. It made it much more believable when she finally asked to be with him again. Everything else was solidly written, and worthy of a story I'd want to read again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Loved it all.

Very well written and developed. I enjoyed this story immensely. I have a love/hate feeling about the happy ending, but this was a great read.

chytownchytownabout 11 years ago
Good Read****

Thanks for sharing.

1Thinkingman1Thinkingmanabout 11 years ago
I thought

In a divorce in the US. If one of litigants is found guilty of a felony the other got everything in the divorce? If this is true then why not send him to prison for the rest of his life? *****

phil2213phil2213about 11 years ago
Great erotic story

This story was extremely erotic which only underpinned the elephant in the room. Erik was in love with Shannon and he never quite got over her. Shannon was not aware of what love was but learned Erik could be quite the instructor to her body but more importantly her soul. This story wreaked with deep overtones masked by erotic bliss masterfully assembled by a true artist. The story was moving and it had me searching in the folds of my own loves of past and rocked me. What more could anyone want from a story? This is amazing. Thank you!

BTTapBTTapalmost 11 years ago
This is my favorite Rehnquist story

I'm usually not into the bondage/power games stuff too much, but this was great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I remember reading this before...

and I liked it even more the second time. There were alot of details here that you presented just right, it was very satisfying to witness her falling in love with him again. Interesting how this time, I was more aware of the holes in the plot you left, (pressumably on purpose?), allowing for trouble ahead down the road as if you had intended to continue the storyline of these two. What are the problems associated with fucking Rebecca, the law partner? How well could he adapt to and accept her kids? Would she, in time, want to keep pushing the envelope sexually? If so, would it present other problems? I liked how you wrote this story making us like her, the idea that the selfish self-serving bitch can finally realize the error of her ways, and submit to the idea of someone elses happiness before her own. But, as it was only after she won her case, and fared better in the divorce than she had feared (getting what she wanted first), how likely that this new UNselfish Shannon will stick around?? I think Eric is taking a huge risk, but as long as he has Becca the fuck buddy as a back-up, maybe it WILL work out. I don't see you returning to these characters for a followup, but I guess the point of this comment was to let you know that you did a good enough job here that it would be possible, and appreciated. Thanks!

WisquejacWisquejacalmost 11 years ago
read it and then read it all over again!

one of the best stories i have read on literotica. well written and just draws you in. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wow

great story

amischiefmakeramischiefmakerover 10 years ago
Nice

Good story, overwhelming all-time sex; about the easiest 5 I've ever given.

rdd1953rdd1953over 10 years ago
Good Stuff

Well I've finally found yet another great author on this site. For those on here thar critisise I would like to see them to try and entertain us on this site for free, as many do. For that sir I thank you

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
I read this quite a while back, I don't think I left a comment.

I won't go into detail, I just want to say that I loved this story (I love happy endings) and only hoped that Shannon would come around. Yes, it is just a story but a great one. For those that say negative things about it, that's your privilege, I just don't understand you. To each his own. I loved it and I read for entertainment. I don't care for BDSM but this was done tastefully (if it ever can be that way) and I did not object. Thank you for writing.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 10 years ago
Loved it

My second time reading this. A truly wonderful, albeit unusual, story. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just like Shannon ...

this story sucked cock! One question .. how long before this SKANK runs off for another dick .… answer that and you'll know why this story got a "1". Remember .. The Earth is round, the sky is blue and once a whore always a whore!! Thus endth the lesson "Educating Rehnquist!"

talldarkfellowtalldarkfellowover 10 years ago
The BTB crowd wanders into yet another category.

I hope none of these prattling refugees from the Loving Wives category ever betray anyone: financially, spirituality, emotionally or (especially) sexually.

They sure as hell have foreclosed any hope of compassion or mercy for themselves, just based on their own oft-repeated judgments.

This was a solid story.

RedPillRedPillover 10 years ago
Stupid Anons ...

@ talldarkfellow - Well said.

I'm not against a BTB tale, where the storyline and character development shows it to be appropriate. But I also enjoy characters that undergo redemption, if the author "sells" me on the change in that person. Those who want to make comments to any story that doesn't follow their preferred arc like "story sucked, once a cheater always a cheater, case closed" are usually anon, too gutless to post under even an assumed id. I don't see any constructive dialog being likely with those who are stupid enough to think that the world is composed of one two categories of people: 1) Those completely pure as the driven snow, never erring, and 2) Those who are devils in human flesh, incapable of any change for the better.

That said, past behavior is the best clue to future behavior. The posts of some who think Erik shouldn't trust her have a point. But I think they probably read too much into the last sentence, "I suddenly had the feeling this was going to work out just fine." I read that as a way for Rehnquist to succinctly close the story with an indication that Erik is willing to cautiously let Shannon go through that process of persuading him over time, by her behavior, that she really has changed. One could read it differently, but I think the whole of the story, and particularly the discussion just above, lends itself to this reading.

smokepolesmokepoleabout 10 years ago
the loss

What this character (Shannon) lacked was the proper buildup. What the previous comments marked was the same thing I picked up on - what bothered me most. Shannon never truly redeemed herself. We didn't see or get a sense of her changing (emotionally or psychologically) to the point where the hero (I still don't know what his name is) would be acceptably enticed to take her back. He exhibited weakness through the majority of the story with just being willing to get her in the sack instead of really making her aware of the hurt she caused him. He was the proverbial doormat.

I don't know if this is an earlier work, but it lacks the worldliness that you exhibited in the Damp Gray and Wish series. Although there are always cases where redemption could be considered (again the Gray series could have been one). This wasn't one

The sex was fairly well done, but at some points, I was spending more time trying to envision the position than enjoying the acts being portrayed. I think I have that problem with my writing, giving too much detail and then hoping it reads smoothly.

I want to say more, but I think I'd be getting nit-picky. It's a good try, but not one of your better ones.

Thank you nonetheless

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great after all this time

Came back to this story and read it (prbly the most erotica centric story of yours) Very well done realistic character changes too. Shannon changing after being abused and becoming a mother makes sense. Loved it come back to us!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
More Shannon and Rebecca

love to see this story continue with additional chapters with their 3 way with Rebecca - and varations like Rebecca and Shannon with Erik watching, Erik and each of the women while the other watches. Maybe the three of them living together. Maybe a back story where Shannon's ex-husband tries to get even or tries to blackmail her into giving up custody of their children.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
for now

It won't you know. She's going to break your heart again. It's who and what she is.......more and different thrills will find their way into her life....you awakened a sexual animal. Enjoy the ride, but prepare for the pain.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Real Life sucks

Shannon is indeed a self-centered, self-serving woman, at least she was... Actions always speak the loudest of all the "voices" of character. Could she change? Yes. She just endured a relationship where she experienced the same callous disregard Erik did. Maybe, if the story was taken further, she could evince her change by her actions toward Erik. The fact that she was in Erik's home when he arrived shows she was committed to the founding of a new relationship based on separate and shared experiences.... Only time and her actions will truly tell the tale.

HereticMessiah

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceover 9 years ago
Yeah, see, I'm a romantic and I have a little problem here...

Not once does she say that she loves him.... Maybe she thinks the way she's saying things should make it clear she does... but does it...? Make it clear, I mean...

She says she loves his cock and missed his cock and wants his cock all to herself... but nothing about loving him or missed him or wanting him...

She's found what she wants and what she needs and maybe happiness (?)... but still not the words... sure, you could argue how could she just change to loving him suddenly after 10 years... but if she's "found it where it was all along", referring to the happiness et al, then why didn't she find the love that should have been "there" all along...?

You could argue that she doesn't have to say it, that he just *knows*... but how well did just knowing work for him before...? Eh, it's his heart to risk...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great long love scene....

That was perty much all about really good sex and I loved it....bill

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Really enjoyed this

Great story, I enjoyed how in control Erik was while still focusing on bringing Shannon's deepest desires to the surface.

Just one minor point: I think on page two, you meant to write "palpate," not "palpitate." Thanks for sharing.

KarenEKarenEabout 9 years ago
Rebecca

Maybe if Rebecca wants to play, that can keep them both too satisfied to stray!

jlorthiajlorthiaover 8 years ago
Loved this story!

Great, very good sex scenes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Clever, hot, imaginative, but some problems with the ending

Congrats. Great story. Five out of five. It was a great revenge/reluctant erotic story. It was also extremely well written. Little bit of the male fantasy with the bi third female partner but fantasies are fun. Great sex scenes. Almost no typos. I was a little disappointed by the ending. Not enough to knock off a star, but it felt like she got a happily ever after a bit too easily. I would have liked to have seen him refuse her after she said she wanted to get back with him, and then after some termoil them end up together. Sort of a BTB/RAAC hybrid if you will. But that is just my personal taste. Cheers Steve

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 8 years ago
Where oh where has this author gone?

Every time I re-read a story by this author I am haunted by the question of where is this author now publishing his great and entertaining stories. If he is still publishing stories, what name is he using. The last one he posted to this site was in Oct. 2011. I cannot him anywhere else using the name Rehnquist. The only person that comes up is the late Chief Justice. So again, where oh where has this wonderful author gone?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it, brilliant , thanks 5*

Really well written with a great story line, intense emotions and great sex. Perfect.

Even fell in love with the slut bitch who ditched him so cruelly......

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Unlike others

This story is not like your others and has much more eroticism in it, contrasting with a longer human issue story. It is well written (as all your work) but getting back together after what she did? That somehow doesn't seem like a good ending to a terrorist attack she made 10 years before.

Ouch!

Tiny Tim

jimbo103jimbo103over 8 years ago
yup diffrent from others, indeed.

like this comment by me, i had written a huge one, but chickened out at the end, i'll just say that the story was written well, but not a creative plot,yet the story itself makes up for the lack of a creative plot

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
This author needs to begin long term therapy with a really good shrink, asap.

A top notch Attorney who got cold bloodedly shit on in spades by a self centered cunt just wipes the slate clean so SHE ATE HER (and his) CAKE FOR TEN YEARS AND HE GIVES HER MORE OF IT?? You must jerk off on your Wheaties.

You're a warped, gutless coward who has no concept of justice, sense of deep emotional bitterness or of simple common sense. I almost have more respect for a child fucker than for an author who'd peddle the putrid drivel at the end as being a believable possibility.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I'm surprised a story can be so well-written

While simultaneously lacking any and all character development or motivation whatsoever. The protagonists seemed to be inept in all social interaction that wasn't sexual. I hope I never meet anyone like any of these people ever.

SampkyangSampkyangabout 8 years ago
Nice Story

Very well written. BUT I would NOT take that slut back, she WILL cheat again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great read

And well written too! I really enjoy your work. Unlike others, I think they're going to make if work. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Difficult to believe he'd trust her again

She ended their original affair after five years by spontaneousy and simply saying, "we're through". Now after ten years and no explanation for the original betrayal he is willing to start anew. More than a little stretch of the imagination.

MartyMBMartyMBalmost 8 years ago
5*s

I gave it 5 stars because I needed that type of story at the time I read it. It does have some drawbacks, though. Shannon rejected Erik so quickly, so uncaringly, with no reason or warning, and with no discussion, that I can't see them ever hooking up, much less being a couple again. I can't see how Erik's game (punishment, revenge, or whatever you call it) changed or accomplished anything. Lastly, I agree with others that Erik could never trust her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Your stories are

well written with or without sexual content. This story wasn't nearly as crude as it could have been because you made it erotic instead. OK...Scotty

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