by mermaid_girl
I am SO glad to see an update of this story! I like the way things are going, but they seem to be moving a bit fast (like how would Clara know that Manolito seems more open with her than with his brother or - other people - when the two of them just met and BARELY had a whole conversation?). Other than that, thanks for the update and I look forward to seeing more!
this story updated but felt it jumped a few steps too many. Liked the little brother and the hpt passion between Mano and Clara.
I was going to check if the next chapter of Rainey's Song was going up, and i stumbled upon yours/ I must say I'm very impressed! Update ASAP!!! :D
I'm still sitting at the edge of my seat...panting. This is one hot story. I love the plot and the characters (well except for Alono of course). I can't wait to see what happens next. I love all of your stories! Please don't make wait long for this one or Gentle Cowboy. They are fantastic!
I sure hope that there is another chapter to this story. It could be the ending of the story or just more of the story, just don't leave me hanging. I am involved and need to see the story to the end. In other words, you are a very good writer and I enjoy the story very much. So please continue the story. Thanks
This story is very hot and interesting. Manolito sounds yummy!!! Please continue this story.
amazing, i am in love with this story, please PLEASE keep it going. great job.
I can't help but wishing this were a book. You have me hooked on the story line and the development of the characters is fantastic. Please write more, soon.
Your stories. This could not have been better! Please add another chapter? Would be GREATLY appreciated.
Finish this story! I am going nuts not knowing how it continues or ends!!!!
I last read this last year. i wish there was more! I was enjoying those two...
please!!!!!!!!!!!! (with a cherry popped) ...lol can u finish the story? this is good.....
I don't know what else to say, for a romance this is amazing
it has depth of story, amazing characters, and leaves you wanting more
can't wait to read the next chapter!
Wow! That's an awesome story line! Luv it! IT'S BEEN TO LONG FINISH THE STORY ALREADY