All Comments on 'Jungle Man Ch. 04'

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savannuhsavannuhover 15 years ago
Ahhh...

I am SO glad to see an update of this story! I like the way things are going, but they seem to be moving a bit fast (like how would Clara know that Manolito seems more open with her than with his brother or - other people - when the two of them just met and BARELY had a whole conversation?). Other than that, thanks for the update and I look forward to seeing more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Glad to see...

this story updated but felt it jumped a few steps too many. Liked the little brother and the hpt passion between Mano and Clara.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow!!!!

I was going to check if the next chapter of Rainey's Song was going up, and i stumbled upon yours/ I must say I'm very impressed! Update ASAP!!! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantastic!

I'm still sitting at the edge of my seat...panting. This is one hot story. I love the plot and the characters (well except for Alono of course). I can't wait to see what happens next. I love all of your stories! Please don't make wait long for this one or Gentle Cowboy. They are fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Is there going to be another chapter????/

I sure hope that there is another chapter to this story. It could be the ending of the story or just more of the story, just don't leave me hanging. I am involved and need to see the story to the end. In other words, you are a very good writer and I enjoy the story very much. So please continue the story. Thanks

FunfemaleFunfemalealmost 15 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!

This story is very hot and interesting. Manolito sounds yummy!!! Please continue this story.

Aingeal222Aingeal222almost 15 years ago
AWESOME

amazing, i am in love with this story, please PLEASE keep it going. great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
impatient

hurry up with a new chapter already...p.s, i luv marco

save_the_animals_jbsave_the_animals_jbabout 14 years ago
Finish it

Please finish it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
love love love

please finish this

its great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

I can't help but wishing this were a book. You have me hooked on the story line and the development of the characters is fantastic. Please write more, soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
need more!

please add to this!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

there needs to me more. Please write more this is such a good story

dreamcastteendreamcastteenalmost 14 years ago
Absolutely ADORE

Your stories. This could not have been better! Please add another chapter? Would be GREATLY appreciated.

AmebedeAmebedeover 13 years ago
PLEASE

Finish this story! I am going nuts not knowing how it continues or ends!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

great story! please continue!!!

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 13 years ago
still good story

I last read this last year. i wish there was more! I was enjoying those two...

loverofmenloverofmenabout 13 years ago
please

please!!!!!!!!!!!! (with a cherry popped) ...lol can u finish the story? this is good.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Update, Update, Update!!!

Would really like to see another chapter ASAP!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

add more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wow

I don't know what else to say, for a romance this is amazing

it has depth of story, amazing characters, and leaves you wanting more

can't wait to read the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
finish!

Finish the story! Its been almost 5 years!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Wow! That's an awesome story line! Luv it! IT'S BEEN TO LONG FINISH THE STORY ALREADY

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good Story

But why didn't you finish the dam thing????

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

wish you would have continued this...

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