by Domwoolf
I'm not quite sure what I expected but this wasn't it. I get that Carol is your pet, I get that you want her her to do these things. What I don't get is that she loves you for it, apparently. But then I don't really understand BDSM so if you both enjoy this sort of thing then have at it.
I really liked the fact he didnt know what the violent wand and wheel were for ...lets go medical instruments and quack medicine.lol
but I certainly am not as confused as Anon in a cold place. He did not even question the category before down rating it because in fell into a category that he did not understand. I wonder if his rating would have been the same if in BDSM, unles he does not read anything in BDSM.
I read less and less BDSM on this site but yours is a prime example of what it should be with the one missing item as a safeword - really needed for an amateur and a gagged sub/slave.
But it fit the bill for either catagory, was well written and probably will get dozens off comments for anything well written in Loving Wives.
Ok story but should Mike,mentioned only in the last two lines, be Bob?
the author must have rewritten the ass fucking scene, but forgot to delete one of the two versions. Needed an editor.
What the fuck is wrong with the guy.
You don't invite another man in!
You bring another woman in!
Makes me wonder if he isn't a bit of a poofter.
Fucking idiot. Telling another man to fuck his wife. Pantywaist.
You should stick to erotic horror, because this was not erotic and it was horrible.