All Comments on 'Jenn Again -- In the Bedroom'

YAY! I'm glad they finally got to make love! BUT...too short! :-b That was like one of the biggest teases I have read in a while! Looking forward to the next part to see what happens next. This story has a lot of potential to go on for a while. Lot's a drama can happen with emotions and feelings etc... I think you're doing an excellent job with this so far especially as a beginner writer. Thank you for sharing it here with everyone. :-)

I mean, the chapter... No seriously, You prove you have the right touch for simple, nice romantic appetizers.<P>

You may challenge yourself now to a little bit more with dressed up stories: perhaps characters with some more depth or a plot which carries some more complication...I think you can do it - Yes you can!