All Comments on 'Cuckolding Katie'

Well written and totally believable.

What it is, this is closer to the truth than all the crap about making our marriage stronger thats piled on here. Its still interesting to see where this would go, thanks.

little white wimp. when it was discussed between him and his wife, the little white wimp jacks his little dick frantically, all hard, almost instantaneously.... <p>

now, after having seen how big the black man's dick is, and how much leo's been able to make his katie twist and screm, he can't live with himself! it's not all her fault; I must take some blame, too,,, she's been good to me all this time we're together,,, it's only when I asked her to fuck some dumb black man with a cock almost as big as a horse, that I lost it! <p>

LOL, I mean, is THAT the moral here? i'm sure Katie is now thinking, so resolutely, that Leo or other black men equipped like him will be the only ones she could live with and fuck with now? LOL <p>

this is "reality" or "more real" than some? <p>

there's little that is not good about the writing; it's just that the plot and characterization are just too silly. <p>

Now, if it had turned out the little white wimp had said to us, the reader: you know, I am big enough to face the music. I love Katie too much to let her go, so I simply acquiesced to her wishes, even if I'm not man enough to be in charge any more. nightly, I must drive her to see Leo and his friends. it hurts me like hell, but what can I do? I have self-cuckolded and I will have to live with it, with Katie and her big dicked lovers, until the end! <p>

if THAT were the ending of the story, then EVEN if I still won't like it, I'd give it a higher score, because the psychology/characterization is consistent

Would love for the cuckold seed planted to come to full blown fruition and return to her begging for more

If you feel for a sequel, why not. Curious to see what you come up with.

Had he shot himself to death then I would have found the characters believable. Also if Katie had shown a great deal more disdain for the stupid fuck she married. How do you respect a person that does not respect themselves. Good writing, interesting concept, horrible characterization and ending.

I don't know. Enjoyed the story though, and well written.

Perhaps a sequal would be good

I very much enjoy your stories and the way you write. I hope you publish more soon but I think this story hs a good conclusion so don't mess it up with a follow up.

i usually dont like cuckolding stories, but this one i kinda like. i guess it the abscence of the need to humiliate the husband/partner. nicely written. bring on the sequel.

Very well done and totally believable. In reality that ending is what happens 70% of the time with couples that try to pull it off. As a whole, the story was very well written and very hot, I enjoyed it. And yes, I would like to see a sequel, preferably with Leo in the mix again.

do write sequel,should be full emotions if do they care for eachother,otherwise consquences is a bitch

Sorry that I can't give a higher rating than "5."

Well written, and am looking forward to the sequel.

However the only thing that makes this cuckold story slightly more real than most is that the husband walked away. He felt he couldn't cope with another person in the marriage. THAT is more realistic than some wimp willed cuckold spending the rest of their marriage or the rest of thier life, which ever comes first, licking and sucking thier wifes pussy just so the wife can get off an the power trip of being the dominant one. I have to say that in part two the husband will go back to the wife and he will probably do exactly what the wife says. But well writen story I guess.

The story was erotic and respectful. Hubby wasn't humiliated, Katie was loving towards her husband and the threesome was hot. Then came the end. What the fuck was that? You have them divorce because he couldn't handle his wife's affair and he was the one encouraging it? What a complete downer. Thanks for nothing.

crap. Husband comes back begging for more. Wife turns into big dick lover. Please have them do the unexpected, love each other and admit it was a mistake for both of them. Turn it into a loving ending. Thanks for a good read.

I would be interested in a sequel. You actually handled this very well, and I think the ending was in fact very realistic. Sometimes good ideas at the time turn out to be bad ideas. I am interested to see where you will take this.

I was surprised with them ending in divorce, especially with him going along with it from the very beginning. Hopefully if you write a sequel, it will include him waking up. If this was in real life, and this being my own opinion, I wouldn't expect Katie to not enjoy further black experiences, whether she go back to see Leo again (much like the redhead she met in the ladies room) or have further relationships with other black guys...but none the less, I would hope that they get back together and in some way where he can deal with her obvious black desires...

a better author and do not usually put out a load of shit like this!

Seasons Greetings

Thanks for your comments.

Just a quick point regarding characters in this story. Katie and Matt are not actually married, but just living together. The relationship was always fragile and there is little if any long term committment to each other. Its more a relationship of convenience. The romp with Leo was a little sexual excitment with unexpected emotion from both both parties once life returned to normal. The sequel will be submiited soon.

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Bazzza

Kate cannot be a Cuckold, unless she has asex change.

story with the end it deserves, he had to leave. the problem is she already did that to her ex-husband and so far I can't see that the greedy bitch learned her lesson. you can do a lot in a partnership but there has to be respect towards eachother. he should provide her new partners with the needed informations before she starts the next stunt to somebody and hurt him.

A new and very interesting take on this kind of story.

I and I'm sure many others would be interested in how it turns out in a new chapter.

Please write it.

Happy Holidays

Good story. Go for it.

It could be either a gerund or present participle modifying Katie. A sequel would be appreciated.

Boyd

I liked the story and am interested in where you take it.

just showing us one more time how greedy and unloving and not caring women are, once they love sex more than a friendship, partnership, marriage? we all know that.

Yes, a follow up would be great.

A very good story.

Although I realize your story is fiction (at least I hope it is) the fact is very few if any long term faithful marriages can withstand this kind of activity. It is a lie that after years of faithful, loving and trusting marriage a woman or a man can cross that line and not be affected for years to come and in many case for the rest of their lives. Only marriages that start out with this level of openness and sexual sharing can hope to make it through with out damage, still even in those marriages, many fail. Well over 90% of all marriages where another person knowingly has been sexually involved with one or both of the spouses FAIL. In reality the only ones that escape undamaged are the ones where the indiscretion is kept completely secret. Although in many of them the guilty partner is so torn that the secret eventually comes out and the marriage fails.

So if you want to write the next chapter, I am sure many readers will find it enjoyable because you are a great writer. BUT Please, just keep it real ... it is only the believable fiction that makes a goo story, unless it is so far from reality that know one in their right mind would even confuse it as possibly being true.

I totally agree with the fisrt commenters statement, what he said is true, any marriage that includes a third sex partner is headed for failure, soooo IF you think you would want to involve another person into your bedroom to satisfy a fantasy you better be prepared for your marriage to fail, jealousy is right around the corner in these situations. It's a good story but a sad one since this couple split up . A friend

The cheating slut gives you the ultimatum. One thing I've learned in life, don't throw around those kind of statements unless you have thought out all the possible outcomes and can live with anyone of them. You made the only decision possible when confronted with her cheating and you'll get over it. Move on.

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

Keep it up, very erotic

Blacks do not have the large dicks and if they have big dicks they normanly can not get it hard enough to get it in. And they damn sure can not get it up for a second go the same night.

The second lie is that she felt guilty. She said she was to sore to fuck her boyfriend but like any woman she sure spread her legs for a strange cock. Never met a woman that did not cheat, but would not let their man get a little on the side. Cheating is for them only.

Your story coved the bases very well. I tried to put my self in Matts place I would rather know and participate than be cheated on. ?? The questions Matt asked at the end of page two were quite revealing. I already wonder if women have a sexy secret that I'm better off not knowing. For me vanilla will be a better scoop of life.

Good adventure, and descriptive story, ("like watching porn but I know the actress")

Did you write the follow up?

I guess you were only kidding about the sequel. I was really looking forward to it with high hopes that you would bring them together without making him a cuckold for life. I seriously doubt that was your intent so I guess its better off that you didn't write the sequel. I do enjoy reading your work, but in this case I was left unsatisfied and somewhat disappointed. I realize it's only a story, but I read for enjoyment and your ending took all the joy out of your story.

you bear a lot of the blame. You could have stopped it at any time , jackass. I will never understand why anyone would want another male to fuck their significant other, much less watch. Guess I'm insecure right? Dumb fuck, feel sorriest for katie.

This dumb ass should have known the consequences... He got what was coming to him..should have known better but now he suffers forever missing out on his true love

Not really she should have shown restraint.

i liked the story. I have a fantasy of watching my gf with a well hung black guy. I hope we can make it happen soon. She also likes the idea of me watching her with a bbc.

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Gerry199, at least you'll know whos baby it is after you hook your wife up.

A well-written story with a good plot. The sex scenes were sensational. Go for a sequel. I can imagine a number of possibilities.

Congratulations to the Matt character for not accepting to help this character defile his girlfriend then making the decision to leave her. I mean a few weeks too late but hey, beats remaining a Cuck wimp

I'm not about to share any well hung guy with my hubby, even if he just wants to be voyeur.

Sad. Realistic. Well-written. The characters were not the perfect, beautiful, faultless, unconflicted, always congruent superhumans we usually read in these stories. Yeah, it's an easy five.