All Comments on 'Star Ch. 01'

Can't wait for more. Keep them coming!

I love the storyline, but you could really use an editor. You make pretty simple errors -- those that can be corrected easily -- such as capital letterings, word usage and such. If you need any help, don't hesitate to drop me a mail. I'm willing to help if need be(: <3 Lillian, KR.

Love it! The story, the backround of the characters, the writing, everything! I'm totally hooked. Looking forward to the next installment.

Great Story! Star and Micah are really good together. They would make wonderful couple, once Micah is honest enough to tell her. Update Please!!!!

Im just a sucker when it comes to a love story. Keep it up... Cat

Love stories have me hooked.

Please come back and write the next few chapters!!! Please!

I enjoyed reading this looking forward to the next chapter

great start. can't wait to see what happens next. and also, very nice flow, in terms of connections and explanations.nice.

I love how this starts, looking forward to reading the rest soon.

I love Micah and Star!!