All Comments on 'Daughter's Seduction'

A very quick begingin ta get tha juices flowin for tha rest of story.Hope you do more writing

Well done!, I have not been moved for some time.

I've found reading story after story of this kind day after day makes one less moved and hard to please..

Your story, Well Done!..thanks...

Totally believeable and hot . Loved every second; only wish she had teased him more for a few days before the big bang .

Very sexy. Nice romantic buildup to the climactic event. I'd love to be seduced the way she seduced him.

There were a few typos but it didn't completely take away from the story. Loved it and can't wait to read more. Keep on writing.

Not bad so far... But yet another author that doesnt know where the hymen is, lol. This one funnier than most, heh.

On to the next chapter! :)

Bacon not beacon. Accidentally not accidently. Myself not my self.