All Comments on 'My Name Is Cindy'

Need another Bro.?

There is nothing at all wrong with your writing or your storytelling talents. Great Story. Keep up the good work.

This story is excellent! Well written, fun sexy charachters, and sensuously exciting! Keep up the wonderful work!

This story is excellent! Well written, fun sexy charachters, and sensuously exciting! Keep up the wonderful work!

It'been a long time comming but at last a story thats made my day!... VERY GOOD.. real or not, VERY good.. I read your Bio and seen your picture, it was also Very good... Don't stop now!.. Pen away!!!

Your actual story content was just fine, nice pacing and all, but jeez, the way you incessantly describe yourself, you're God's gift to humankind...all men will lust for you, and all women will want to be like you.

Otherwise, a great story, but please try to hide your narcissism...it's just way overboard.

This story was one of the best I have read in a long time. Since you said there is more please tell us more in your vivid erotic style.

between bro/sis. Most common form of incest on record. It's interesting and erotic like this writer makes it. But Lord does she like herself!

i thought your story rocked. you should take out the apologies at the front!

spen sterling

You suggested it was true life, not necessarily saying it was you, but it was fantastic reading and I enjoyed immensely. Hope you keep writing - it has a "from the heart" approach that I like

It had the ring of truth, but true or not it was one of the best brother/sister incest tales that I have read. And I have read a lot of them. Give us more!

Great story, but like others, I thought you to be too into yourself, which is in itself a turnoff.

Your writing is great....please give us more!!

None of this reads as literature nor believable from the mile high ego of the female character to the ineptness of the brother. She exhibits the strange manifestation that since she got a cock up she must be hot to all men when most men prefer Mary Ann to Ginger on Gilligan's Island for being approachable.

That is thee foremost problem with the story in it reads like a teenage mentality from a fast writing girl who never grew up and has relied on her assets or tit sets which plunge around in this story.

Readers are expected to believe a dong that large on a skinny boy was never noticed by anyone and the sister's friends who she apparently has none in coming over never noticed the package either. Yeah right! with a !!!! too California frequent in the story.

At least for trying I would have given you a 25, but with all the titties and man pole metaphors this was reading juvenile wet dreams in bad stories.

If your profile photo is real, you have relied on tits instead of writing for too long and if you are a guy like most lurkers posting as women you don't have an excuse for writing this poorly.

wow what a story.I felt like I was there.keep up the good work.Kept me with a boner.

liked the story now for part 2 - you took his cherry fair is fair he takes your anal cherry ;-)

"And I'm not sure what to do about it."

- Please let us know what happens next.

Great story .. awesome work.

Best luck!

Thanks

Excellent job! It was a fantasic read. And I can only hope for more.

Bravo! Thanks for writing!

10 1/2 36dd i think it was not sure because i am not gona read the story again.

God how many stories are going to be made where the guy is super good simply because he has a monster schlong.

Lust and love can come out of nowhere and blindside people. This story contained both and was an excellent read. More to come I hope.

your story was most awesome. i especially liked the described teasing, and the very naughty talk, which slowly increased.

more of that!

Loved the story; not sure about the guilt trip at the end but you are a hot writer. Keep at it xx

Ignore the people who can crtizice without using their usernames, it was a great hot story, keep writing.

Thanks!

I'm Kelly. I live in Canada and am 18 and loved your story. I did it with my brother too before and if u want me to tell u the things we have done to help with your next story u can email me at kellypam18@aol.com. I use aol IM too and its kellypam18. Mark loved reading your story and he thinks u look awesome in your pic. I do too and I'll send u mine if u want. byebye, Kel

Very hot, 2nd time reading this. Producing exactly the same response. Breathlessness

And that's the key word: FANTASY. To all her detractors, if you don't want to read fantasy, then don't read porn. Go read a newspaper. Saying that it's unrealistic is like saying that Superman is unrealistic because the guy's always flying around and picking up buildings. Fantasies are supposed to be over-the-top, fun, and playfully exaggerated. Wonderfully writing. Keep it up!

That is possibly the hottest, horniest, and filthiest thing I have ever read. It is also the sexiest. Cindy you are incredible! Whatever you do, don't stop now: my jaw is on the floor, I am in open-mouthed awe of you. You are a Sex Goddess . . .

GREAT STORY, and FANTASY!!!!! don't be so critical to her because she made him hung like a horse. Don't be SO insecure.

Cindy......AWSOME ! !, i gave this a 5 only because i couldn't give it a 10 ! I Don't know if it's really true or not but eaither was...HOT, EXCITING, HUGE

TURN-ON Girl !! I had to read it twice and both times had my hand full before the end and i'm still dripping 10 min. later....WOW. LOVED the story (even more so if true !)

and how you gave such great discription's and the language was really hot. Hope you keep writting girl ! ! Much more of this and i'll be a huge fan ! By the way, LOVE your picture Cindy, only wish we could actually see them beautiful thing's !.........Thanks for the story........

TittySucker !

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Oh damn, i wish you were my sister. that was some of the hottest writing I've ever read. Think I'll go see my sister tonight. More...Please!

WOW, fucking A, what a sister. Thanks for the story.

This was one great story! I do hope you will share more of your stories with us.

A very well told story with real heat on the page.

Delicious. Hope we see more of your work.

Excellent bit of erotica highly recommended, this lass paints lovely sexy images with her words

HOT, HOt, Hot, hot!!!

No other words necessary.

i went to my sisters room and saw that she was naked and sleeping i wet my finger and finger fucked her took my dick out and put it her pussy and fucked her she woke up and said that fells good keep fucking me fuck me hard and fast and i took my dick out of her pussy and told her to suck me she sucked it so good and long that i cumed in her mouth and she swollowed my cum and said that was so good i want your cum all the time so i was sucking her tits and got hard again she said thats right get it nice and hard and fuck me i want you to cum deep in my pussy so i did this was going on for 8 weeks she told me she was having a baby and i said who is the dad she told me i was i said are you for real she said for 8 weeks i was with you only i didnt fuck anyone for a yr i didnt know what to do we are going to have a baby form a sister and brother 9mths it a boy at his 13teen birthday i told him what do u want for birthday he told me he wanted his dick sucked he wanted me to suck his dick so i said ok he got naked and i sucked his dick and he told me he wanted to suck my dick also he cumed in my mouth and he told me to swollow it i was not going to wast it i said and then i cumed in his mouth and he swollowed all my cum also so now i suck my sons dick and still fuck my sister ,,,,the end ( this is not real it was a dream that i sucked him )

thanks.u r real sisi of mine.ur words and picture making me cum.

i also had sex with my oldest brother hes 54 im 52 and it stared when we were in our early 20s and still today were both married but we still try to hook up every 4 to 6 months and make love all day long and its the greatest sex i have ever had......keep up the great work i loved your storie hope to read many many more....you are a TRUE writer....

This story is amazing please please please write more, a sequel perhaps?

That was so incredibly hot! Would love to read the sequel.

WE NEED MORE TRUE STORIES LIKE THIS WISH I WAS HIM

This story is very real!! I'm Glad you wotre it. This world wood be far better off if more siblings had this kind of LOVE for each other. Just think what it would do to the divorce rate!!!. I find NOTHING wrong with this. It was how the world started to be populated. Although society does not approve it still is a very GOOD love story. Keep up the excellent writing.

Very hot and loving story,beautifully narrated!U feel that there is hot sex BUT mixed with a powerful,unforgettable love!i personally think that the more u have(consensual ones of coure!)such sex relation between such siblings,there would be less diseases,less divorce!But there is a price to pay for it!It's about children !Siblings should avoid having children of their own because of consanguinity!So,if it was practiced worldwide on high level,the danger is that after 75 years ,the earth population will considerably decrease for good or bad!!

that would be so lovely

The stories like these really turn me on and make me want cross the limits. i hope he'll make the move one day like i did . Thank you cindy

still trying to process which part is myth which part is real. It really bothers me.

I wish i had a childhood friend i could love and make her feel like that.

If the incest part is true, Go to Australia, i believe they're somewhat tolerate that. Correct be if i'm wrong. Good Luck.

-waterboy

This is one of the best ever. Wish you were my sister. You should write a sequel where you get preggo.

First story in a long time that's made me have one of the most powerful orgasms in just a page and a half.

Thank you thank you thank you :)

SHIT BABE ANN RICE CAN GO FUCK HER SELF

i'm surprised you know how to write since you seem to rely on your looks for everything espcially your fake tits i really hate women with fake tits and no brains like you.

Really nice you should write some more

I liked it very much

Listen I've read my fair share of stories, but I gravitate towards stories that end in love, I had a mixture of extreme satisfaction both physical and emotional, I applaud the feelings you gave me, thank you

Beautifully executed story I've got chills

all I can say is I wish it were me

All I can say is that from the beginning of your story I was rock hard. I would love to read more. PLEASE write a sequel!!!!!!!

I loved this. Fucking a big cock bareback. Skin on skin so deep inside.

Best

More please! Will you become pregnant?

You wrote from your heart so it must be true . a great story . thank you

Hi. I know that this was iver a year ago, and we'd like an update on everything. Are you pregnant? Ect. Please

Did you end up pregnant

I absolutely loved it!

Great job writing about your story.

Wow a great story and such a lucky brother.

came 3 times reading it!

Just found your tale. Incredibly hot! Thank you for sharing it. I hope you and Mark are still together and happy.

One of the most intimate, sexy, erotic experiences.

I have a sister who is a couple of years older than me. When I was in high school I constantly kept my eyes open for any sight I could get of her voluptuous body. She had really big gorgeous tits, light pink areolas and pink nipples. Her tits would sway and bounce when she wasn't wearing a bra. I saw her naked often when her bedroom door was slightly open. When she would dress I would peek at her. She would sit on the bed naked and pull her pantyhose on. I would get so hard watching her open her legs and I could see her brown haired pussy. She would slip the pantyhose up her legs, then stand up to pull them up to her waist. She had a beautiful pussy. She would pull the pantyhose up to her waist and I could see her pussy through the sheer nylon. I would sniff the sheer crotch of her pantyhose after wore them all day so I could enjoy the erotic scent of her pussy as I jacked off.

This is a beautiful story. It's a hard thing to let your heart feel the things they do. And playing with fire is also a very dangerous thing to do. However, I'm so happy that Cindy realizes the effects her teasing was having on her baby brother. And it is so good that your reward was the ultimate make up for that she had done. Hopefully see did eventually went on the pill because I'm quite sure after that earth suturing first time you and him probably will never use a condom.

Beautiful story.