All Comments on 'Cryopreservation'

Well paced with a nice touch of warmth to it and smutty enough to be arousing without falling into the trap of coarseness. Well done.

On a technical note though, a bit of work needed on your proof reading and layout. Some of the dialogue was a bit crowded and a few typos. Hence only a 75%, but nothing bad enough to seriously detract from your story. Keep writing!

Good story, nice read. nice easy lead-up. great first submission

brilliant story .. i loved it!!

...a finger in the butt.

Super hot otherwise.

Look forward to more with her.