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by Kentish01/07/09

Loved it

Great bit of fantasy writing, really good, only spoilt by the sudden name change at the end. Wish that had happened to me when I had a spell in hospital a few years back!

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by RejectReality01/07/09

Ooops.

Yep, I caught the name change too late. Wrote this in two sit downs on the same day, and the second time I guess I had a new name in my head. Should probably use an editor, but even they miss stuff sometimes. I'll put in a fix for it soon.

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by TwoHOTFORU6901/07/09

Not me.!

GREAT STORY.!! But I am glad that did not happen to me as I had a Hernia Op. and did not want even a fly to land on me - let a alone a body or even a hand.! Got you a "5" and a 100 though,,did not even see the name change. lol

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by knightofhearts01/07/09

Reality

Reality or not that was impressive. I look forward to reading more from you.

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by Anonymous01/10/09

Why you little freak!!

If you make me cum one more time Mister!! I just may have to read all of your stories from here on out(smile). Enough with the reject reality bull crap will you! It's quite clear you enjoy mind fucking us all and we enjoy taking your stories nice deep and hard. All that's let is for you to slap our asses call us whores and give a cigarette before you walk away. Your definitely becoming one of my favorite writers.Keep'em coming.

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by Anonymous01/10/09

Tripple gold

Having just read your first three stories I am very impressed.You must continue writing as I believe that you are a great new talent.Best wishes for your future efforts.

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by Anonymous01/11/09

Great Opening!

Mythbusters' only contribution to the world of erotic literature. I nearly went nuts trying to find the name-change--until I realised you'd corrected it! Good story (standard male fantasy) well told; I'll check out your other offerings, now............Aussie Frank

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by hotfunfla08/19/11

Well Done!

Excellent story. Well written & great characters. Keep up the great work!

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by Anonymous04/23/12

YUP

true story...bill

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by Anonymous08/10/13

lucky

i wish i was that guy...

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