All Comments on 'Lucky?'

Great bit of fantasy writing, really good, only spoilt by the sudden name change at the end. Wish that had happened to me when I had a spell in hospital a few years back!

Yep, I caught the name change too late. Wrote this in two sit downs on the same day, and the second time I guess I had a new name in my head. Should probably use an editor, but even they miss stuff sometimes. I'll put in a fix for it soon.

GREAT STORY.!! But I am glad that did not happen to me as I had a Hernia Op. and did not want even a fly to land on me - let a alone a body or even a hand.! Got you a "5" and a 100 though,,did not even see the name change. lol

Reality or not that was impressive. I look forward to reading more from you.

If you make me cum one more time Mister!! I just may have to read all of your stories from here on out(smile). Enough with the reject reality bull crap will you! It's quite clear you enjoy mind fucking us all and we enjoy taking your stories nice deep and hard. All that's let is for you to slap our asses call us whores and give a cigarette before you walk away. Your definitely becoming one of my favorite writers.Keep'em coming.

Having just read your first three stories I am very impressed.You must continue writing as I believe that you are a great new talent.Best wishes for your future efforts.

Mythbusters' only contribution to the world of erotic literature. I nearly went nuts trying to find the name-change--until I realised you'd corrected it! Good story (standard male fantasy) well told; I'll check out your other offerings, now............Aussie Frank

Excellent story. Well written & great characters. Keep up the great work!

true story...bill

i wish i was that guy...

You do excellent writing and humor as well as very hot sex scenes. Please keep writing more!

I remember being in the hospital for almost a month years and years ago... Every last one of my nurses were hot, not one ugly, fat or old one among them! ...and me? I was in for a spinal surgery, lol. Sometimes you just cant win! Lol.

Broke both legs and both arms in a motorcycle accident 40 years ago. 4 casts. As a shy 23 year old, baths were a bit embarrassing at first, but it got more interesting as time went on. My respiratory therapist made sure I was breathing heavily and deeply - no Pneumonia for me. Finally got the arm casts off so I could reciprocate more. I will remember her fondly for the rest of my life.

LMAO, my wife's a retired nurse. She has STORIES!!!

Definitely lucky! well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.