by Fortysomething
Although this is a familiar theme, it nevertheless is always an enjoyable read, even for us women. Flirting with sons is something that is quite common. Yes, they know the rules and how far to go, although I am convinced they will go much further with a little encouragement. In regards to your story there were places where it seemed rushed and the relationship between the two undeveloped. The story seemed to be in a hurry to get the two together, something which always seems to interest the male readers but leaves the story lacking from the female perspective. Nevertheless, I do appreciate the story and imagine that the fantasy was much hotter than what the author was able to get down in story form. This could have been corrected if she would have treated it as a draft and carefully reviewed it before submitting it. I know this may sound negative but I had such high expectations when I began to read. I quite easily was able to slip into the skin of the frustrated mother, but from the description of the son there was little to make him desirable. I was pulling for you girl, but disappointed. The talent is there, that's easy enough to see, so please try again. Gayle
I'm not really one for incest stories, however, I did enjoy this one. You can always get good results with a pair of sexy boots!
Nothing better than the 'forbidden' natue of mother & son fucking each other........the best stories I think. What surprises me is the number of women who LOVE to play mommy...and have their "sons' fuck them......
Well writen and familiar story that is very well done. Just long enough and exciting to jerk off to.
Nice story well written but ended too fast more drama and tease would have made it a much more interesting story but any ways keep writting more keep it cumming......
are just my poison! Preferably black ones. So this marvelous story met with my own phantasies and worked all too good for me. Next to it's style of language being above standards I liked the mother's nature drawn here which I imagine as cool, rational,self-controlled but emotionally unsatisfied business-woman, finally willing to fill this emptiness with pure carnal lust and the excitement of depravity to linder her urges. Just at the very end I thought she could have said "Thanks for the drink. Up for another?"
Three years is a long time between stories, but well worth the wait. The work is well written and the mother/son conflict,and then loving sex is very well done. I hope that you have the willingness to give us poor readers more of your thoughts. Your ability to write vividly exciting scenes, allows the reader to visualize what you are wanting expressed. Thank You for the post, and hope to see more of your work soon....Rich
I concur with other's. Your stories are far and few between, but well worth the wait! Very evocative descriptions of naughty moments between Mom and son! Looking forward to the next (no matter how long the wait - LOL!).
I think more mothers should take their sons virginity. They would be better lovers in the long run and mom's are more likely to use protection.
Since the son has a boot fetish, I hope Mom uses future bonus checks are more boots of different color and height. I think should encourage her son's photography more also.
I hope they have a few more adventures.
This is want I want more of, boots stories especially mother and son.
Thanks
I liked the story. Fortysomething, you may or may not see this comment because your story dates from 2009 and you have stopped visiting Literotica as well as stopped writing. I found it because I had listed your two stories of five years earlier as favorites of mine. And now it's been about four years. Will you write others? Isn't it fun to write stories of this type and to dream of what will never be realized in everyday life?
I know how he feels. High black boots do wonderful things to me esp if they r tight
Boots, knee length, over the knee and especially thighboots are all a woman needs to attract a man.