All Comments on 'The Black Boots'

by Fortysomething

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GDesmondGDesmondover 15 years ago
familiar but always nice

Although this is a familiar theme, it nevertheless is always an enjoyable read, even for us women. Flirting with sons is something that is quite common. Yes, they know the rules and how far to go, although I am convinced they will go much further with a little encouragement. In regards to your story there were places where it seemed rushed and the relationship between the two undeveloped. The story seemed to be in a hurry to get the two together, something which always seems to interest the male readers but leaves the story lacking from the female perspective. Nevertheless, I do appreciate the story and imagine that the fantasy was much hotter than what the author was able to get down in story form. This could have been corrected if she would have treated it as a draft and carefully reviewed it before submitting it. I know this may sound negative but I had such high expectations when I began to read. I quite easily was able to slip into the skin of the frustrated mother, but from the description of the son there was little to make him desirable. I was pulling for you girl, but disappointed. The talent is there, that's easy enough to see, so please try again. Gayle

LEATBTLEATBTover 15 years ago
Boots get results!

I'm not really one for incest stories, however, I did enjoy this one. You can always get good results with a pair of sexy boots!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good job!

I loved it!

Well written and erotic as can be!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 15 years ago
Good job!

Good job! Well written and erotic as can be!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Start

Nothing better than the 'forbidden' natue of mother & son fucking each other........the best stories I think. What surprises me is the number of women who LOVE to play mommy...and have their "sons' fuck them......

BiskitBiskitover 15 years ago
Good old mom love

Well writen and familiar story that is very well done. Just long enough and exciting to jerk off to.

don_dick21don_dick21over 15 years ago
Good One!

Nice story well written but ended too fast more drama and tease would have made it a much more interesting story but any ways keep writting more keep it cumming......

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Knee-high pointed high-heel smooth leather boots

are just my poison! Preferably black ones. So this marvelous story met with my own phantasies and worked all too good for me. Next to it's style of language being above standards I liked the mother's nature drawn here which I imagine as cool, rational,self-controlled but emotionally unsatisfied business-woman, finally willing to fill this emptiness with pure carnal lust and the excitement of depravity to linder her urges. Just at the very end I thought she could have said "Thanks for the drink. Up for another?"

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
good to have you back

Three years is a long time between stories, but well worth the wait. The work is well written and the mother/son conflict,and then loving sex is very well done. I hope that you have the willingness to give us poor readers more of your thoughts. Your ability to write vividly exciting scenes, allows the reader to visualize what you are wanting expressed. Thank You for the post, and hope to see more of your work soon....Rich

AhabscribeAhabscribeover 15 years ago
Bravo!

I concur with other's. Your stories are far and few between, but well worth the wait! Very evocative descriptions of naughty moments between Mom and son! Looking forward to the next (no matter how long the wait - LOL!).

TammiBadgerTammiBadgerover 15 years ago
Loved It

I think more mothers should take their sons virginity. They would be better lovers in the long run and mom's are more likely to use protection.

Since the son has a boot fetish, I hope Mom uses future bonus checks are more boots of different color and height. I think should encourage her son's photography more also.

I hope they have a few more adventures.

Lost SoulLost Soulabout 15 years ago
More boot stories

This is want I want more of, boots stories especially mother and son.

Thanks

Lost SoulLost Soulabout 12 years ago
Love a story with boots

Thanks for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice story

I liked the story. Fortysomething, you may or may not see this comment because your story dates from 2009 and you have stopped visiting Literotica as well as stopped writing. I found it because I had listed your two stories of five years earlier as favorites of mine. And now it's been about four years. Will you write others? Isn't it fun to write stories of this type and to dream of what will never be realized in everyday life?

john19741john19741over 9 years ago
sexy

I know how he feels. High black boots do wonderful things to me esp if they r tight

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Seems very pg set up

Bigman71Bigman71over 6 years ago
Boots

Loved the story by nice if there was a part 2 to this story.

sandalilangsandalilangabout 4 years ago
Why do most men find boots so sexy?

Boots, knee length, over the knee and especially thighboots are all a woman needs to attract a man.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fantastic. Get thigh boots for next time.

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