All Comments on 'What Are Friends For?'

by cherryontop1973

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cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
ohhhh

yum yum please don't stop more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Please continue

Please continue with this story, I can hardly wait to read more.

Mystery_MeatMystery_Meatover 15 years ago
Good potential - interesting couple

The bi-racial F/WM coupling is interesting, and well-written. Try to find an editor for the next installment. This was rushed and could have been longer. Take the time for character development. How old are they? What is the narrator's name? What color is her hair? etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
i hate teaser stories!

even tho I gave this a 100, I HATE these tease stories, please disclose that at the begining if your going to do it!

wife2hotblkwife2hotblkover 15 years ago
Fabulous story...

I really hope you plan on continuing their story. You did an excellent job of creating believable and likeable characters. The sexual tension between them was great. More...soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow! Hot, Hot, Hot

Soooo sexy, please add t sptoryww, cannot wait to read what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Start....Please Continue

Great Story. Please continue, I would like to see what ultimately happens between these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I want more

Are you going to continue this? You left it open and I want more

cherryontop1973cherryontop1973almost 12 years agoAuthor
yes, i do plan on finishing it

i am actually working on this story now, with every intention of continuing it and posting updates very soon. thanks so much for the encouragement, after all this time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Whoa*****

What are friends for indeed. My gawd, dat taxi groping was hoooot

FrozenSunFrozenSunover 10 years ago
confused?

Was anyone else confused in the beginning?

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
yes, there was confusion

But, that might have been an intentional misdirection by the author.

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