All Comments on 'All in My Head'

great length. not too long or short. i enjoyed the twist. keep it up. you are quite good. it got the job done for me!!

Nice twist at the end talk about one hell of a dream.

i loved your story, it's one of the best here! Keep up the good work!!! :-D

Man what a great story and a wicked twist at the end! Bravo! Keep up the good work!

I'm an avid reader and have been visiting Literotica for nearly seven years. Your stories, all of them *smiles* have made it to the top of my list. If you ever stop writing, I just might cry. Keep it up, please!~Amber Scarlet

Hot dream, hot mama.

I liked the twist; keep up the good work.

I liked it but a little abrupt ending

just perfect

The twist at the end was perfect. Typical teen angst, then boom.

Your writing is impeccable. Great storyline and details. The only thing I would have added would be him thoroughly sniffing, licking, sucking and tongue fucking her tangy tight bumhole until she had a blazing orgasm. 5 stars.

Read with interest ,Really liked the twist at the end....Keep'em cuming....

I expected a twist but it wasn't quite the one that turned up. Clever!