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A Few Too Many

byKarennaC©
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by Anonymous

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by PrincessErin01/13/09

Great

I really liked this story because it was original and I liked the twist at the end.

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by Anonymous01/13/09

I like....

I like it, I like it!!!! MORE please!

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by lisae01/14/09

Good stuff

I agree with Princess Erin, I love a well-written story with a beginning, middle and end and a decent twist. And it doesn't hurt that it's sexy too! Lisae

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by litchipking01/18/09

I'll drink to that.

A little deception certainly can provide a provacative element. The revelation at the end added to an already well-written story. I also thought you handled the first-time girl-girl sex with a delicate touch. A very nice story.

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by AverageBear01/18/09

Very well-done!

Your writing style flows so naturally - with engaging characters and a plausible sequence of events. The story is well written and is extremely hot!

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by penandpaper07/15/09

Great Job

Great characters and the flow of the story was great. I particularly like the dialogue...you did it well. The scenerio was nice too, however, I could have done without the cliche ending. Overall, great job! Can't wait to read more.

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by Anonymous08/10/09

Impressive

Given what a prolific writer you are, I thought there would be a quntity/quality trade-off. Not so...very well written and arousing.

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by Janice193910/13/10

Girls make love men fuck and snore

Great opening to what is true for every woman if they are honest with themselves.
LOL Janice

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