by KarennaC
I really liked this story because it was original and I liked the twist at the end.
I agree with Princess Erin, I love a well-written story with a beginning, middle and end and a decent twist. And it doesn't hurt that it's sexy too! Lisae
A little deception certainly can provide a provacative element. The revelation at the end added to an already well-written story. I also thought you handled the first-time girl-girl sex with a delicate touch. A very nice story.
Your writing style flows so naturally - with engaging characters and a plausible sequence of events. The story is well written and is extremely hot!
Great characters and the flow of the story was great. I particularly like the dialogue...you did it well. The scenerio was nice too, however, I could have done without the cliche ending. Overall, great job! Can't wait to read more.
Given what a prolific writer you are, I thought there would be a quntity/quality trade-off. Not so...very well written and arousing.
Great opening to what is true for every woman if they are honest with themselves.
LOL Janice