All Comments on 'A Few Too Many'

by KarennaC

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PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 15 years ago
Great

I really liked this story because it was original and I liked the twist at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I like....

I like it, I like it!!!! MORE please!

lisaelisaeabout 15 years ago
Good stuff

I agree with Princess Erin, I love a well-written story with a beginning, middle and end and a decent twist. And it doesn't hurt that it's sexy too! Lisae

litchipkinglitchipkingabout 15 years ago
I'll drink to that.

A little deception certainly can provide a provacative element. The revelation at the end added to an already well-written story. I also thought you handled the first-time girl-girl sex with a delicate touch. A very nice story.

AverageBearAverageBearabout 15 years ago
Very well-done!

Your writing style flows so naturally - with engaging characters and a plausible sequence of events. The story is well written and is extremely hot!

penandpaperpenandpaperover 14 years ago
Great Job

Great characters and the flow of the story was great. I particularly like the dialogue...you did it well. The scenerio was nice too, however, I could have done without the cliche ending. Overall, great job! Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Impressive

Given what a prolific writer you are, I thought there would be a quntity/quality trade-off. Not so...very well written and arousing.

Janice1939Janice1939over 13 years ago
Girls make love men fuck and snore

Great opening to what is true for every woman if they are honest with themselves.

LOL Janice

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