by Enithermon
I like your story, the characters, the plot, the scenery, the introspection, the action, the humor, the dialogue, just every little bit you write. That does not happen very often so - Just. Don't. Stop. Give it to me hard and fast or slow and tantalizing, anyway you do I know I will enjoy. Chew toy? My ass! Did I yet mention I like the way you write? Pity I'm not into vampires, fire was a good read although. Waiting for more.
I love the Ferric & Inanna interaction in this installment & am waiting, rather impatiently, for more 'private time' between them. I'm actually enjoying the secondary & tertiary characters too. Well done!
Ha I stand corrected its IV. This one keep getting better with each line and each paragraph. Keep it up
I am hooked on yet another of your stories--so much so that I've started reading about the Elder Scrolls! This chapter was 5 pages long and I was irked that it ended! Please write more! But don't forget about Fire either!
So good! Great characters, great story line. Fantastic length and quick updates too! Well done. Pretty close to perfection. My only question is why is it in the celebrities category? Wouldn't nonhuman be better? Anyway, thanks for writing. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
ok, i'm not usually a big fantasy fan, all the weird names and new images/worlds generally get to me. but i LOVE this story. i have been dreaming of a heroine like Innana. she's strong, self assured, and in no way whatsoever codependent. i can't even say how tired i am of reading weak women. thank you so freaking much. i honestly can't wait for more story. don't get me wrong, the sex is great, but the story is better. which is key to all the best lit has to offer.
please continue with this story! I love it, I have been checking for the next chapter for the last few months, please don't give up on it!
In a good way that is. Love your stories, they never cease to amuse me no matter the situations. Next chapter now!
Loving this story! I was skeptical at first, (which is odd because I am a big gaming nerd) but you quickly won me over. You're an amazing writer and this is just a great story.
truly wonderful piece of work!! very very well written, an maybe the best erotica ive ever read! thx!
coming back to this story and it's even better than last time!