All Comments on 'Nights in Midgard Ch. 01'

If you forcibly rape those who help you, I'd sure-as-hell hate to see what you do to your enemies! The least you could have done was have him SEDUCE her!

Don't listen to Je'ez. It's a reluctance story; she was reluctant. She came, so in the end she enjoyed it. Who cares about all the moments in between when it seemed like she wouldn't? (I unfortunately have an uncanny ability to sound sarcastic when I'm being serious, and I am being serious.) I thought it was great.

Anymore anytime soon???

I hope to see more...it's a really intriguing piece of work. Keep writing!

please continue