All Comments on 'Playing with Cindy - The Beginning'

Fab chapter, babe. Leaves me keen to find out just what Cindy is up to...

You're not just a good smut writer, you're a great story writer, GA.

i loved your story. i would like you to elaborate on you using her panties to masturbate. have her give you a handjob using her dirty panties

While the incest idea has never been one of my main choices of reading, I did appreciate the thought and writing you had here. Great job, GA!

Not only was it hot, but the feelings and emotions between the two characters were very evident. You're a brilliant writer, GA. As always, I look forward to more from you. *mwah*!

The conflicting feelings that David has for his mother makes the story.He wants her so bad that he is willing to give in to her own fantasy, of trying to be someone else. Can't wait for the next chapter.Thanks

You know this is not my subject but the standard of the writing more than makes up for it. The conflict of feeling and the struggle they both have makes it more real and believable than other stories on this subject I've read.

This story was your usual well-crafted work, but you need to continue it. Why DID Cindy return? Shouldn't the readers find out?

I really like / love the story; but what happened - the break-up, the 9 year separation, the future? Please continue;

Thx;

DKP

More please, I am itching to know where it goes now they are reunited.