All Comments on 'A Daemon's Heart Ch. 09'

by KayVamp

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caribbeanislandcaribbeanislandabout 15 years ago
Too short!!

I really enjoy the nonhuman stories on Literotica. I find them more enjoyable than the others even though I love them too.

Back to the story. It was lovely but too short in my opinion. I could have done with a little more flesh on its bones, especially where Izadora and Titus are concerned.

Please don't leave it too long for the next chapter!!!

mechmanasmechmanasabout 15 years ago
more more more

Hey come on you got us interested now u need to keep going

RainezDemisexDRainezDemisexDover 14 years ago
my opinion. =]

dont think it was too short at all i think it was directly to the point. xD very well written. <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it!!

I can not wait for the next chapter!!!!!

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