All Comments on 'A Journey of Passion Ch. 03'

I have read all of the authors previous chapters and all are great as is this one.Jim

I like this story, it is headed somewhere good. Some outstanding dialog written in these chapters. That is not easy. Keep up the good work.

The piece is well written and structured. The four characters presented so far sound interesting!

What a great start to a story. The people feel real because tha is exactly the way I met my beautiful one. I am really looking for the continuation of this story and see how closely it plays out to my own.

Good story Lynn, keep the chapters coming.

DG

You truly bring your characters to life, Lynn. Their emotions are palpable, the scenarios believable and the dialogue realistic. Very well done. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Thanks for sharing.