All Comments on 'Valentine's Secrets'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I didn't feel it

I came this close to give you a 5 vote because of your writing ability. You engaged me immediately. Only, I had to down grade you because this wasn't much of a "Valentine's Day" story.

Other than telling me it was a Valentine's Day story, you didn't show me that it was a Valentine's Day story. I didn't feel the holiday.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Sweet sis...

Since I struggled to put up shelves that actually fit, I even appreciated the carpentry. The sex was fine, keep it up, please.

madengineer3madengineer3about 15 years ago
Very Nice!!

This is a somewhat strange, but very good story. To find two sisters who could share things so completely without rivalry would be astounding. To have an understanding husband who was as willing to share his wife with her sister is also unusual. This is a very hot story in my opinion.

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 15 years ago
Sexy

I don't normally like stories in this category but I enjoyed the story a lot. Good luck.

TwoHOTFORU69TwoHOTFORU69about 15 years ago
The Story.

You got a '5' from me with no "downgrade" and loved every part of this story to the fullest and have gone back to this story several times. Unlike the 'Grinch' who never likes anybodies writings "I say get a life and since you don't like the story lines then quit reading them as they are all bad as far as your mentality is concerned" go read BDSM..more your style.! Chain around your neck would look good on you.! << he likes the limelight and I know he just loves me~~~hehe.!! The story was GREAT and a real turn on for most of us I am sure. Thanks. JAG

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
I liked everything about this story

With being well written and the theme of love, what better story for valentine's day. Even the polygamous life style seemed to fit the story well. Thanks for a very sweet and loving story....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very hot story

Very hot story. Shame the Valentine's Day link was a bit weak otherwise I'd have rated it 100%.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent as always

You continue to amaze and arouse me. To be honest I feel that your series are better but this is still a fine piece of literature. I just wish there could be a little more romance behind it. This is Valentine's Day after all.

marklionmarklionabout 15 years ago
Another Great Story!!!!!

That was another great story from you and I like the way you describe the sex between the sisters and the brother-in-law. I love the way you had him controlling both sisters in this story with the vibrator's in the restaurant. And how they basically raped him when they got home.

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