by leagally_blonde
Well-paced with good details. Looking forward to Chapter 2 and beyond!
A good start to what promises to be an interesting series. Keep it up!
I don't know what she has in mind, but I hope she takes the blackmailing asshole for everything he has. Good story. Rich
Looks like it will be forever more for these two and can't wait to read chapter two. Thanks. JAG/TSO
Although incest/taboo is not my thing, it was a very well writen story nonetheless. I look forward to reading more of your stories.