All Comments on 'Hero'

It was a good story, it's just a shame it felt rushed.

The story seemed a bit rushed for a romance story and left some things unfinished like the interview that was promised.

The plot was decent, but you rushed everything way too fast. Had you slowed down, and used a little more discription in your story it would have been excellent. More detail, less stilted conversation, would have been better. Falling in love takes time, and I didn't really have a sense of true emotion with this. Keep writing, you will get better as you go along.

Another great story from Bassbelly - this one maybe a little too short - lacked background and history, i.e. build-up - but very enjoyable.

Thanks again, Bassbelly.

and some of it just doesn't make sense. How does a young single mom leave her baby for a three week business trip, onto which an additional stay is added in Miami?

Once a hero......

a story of a guy who is always in the right place at the right time. being a hero but not any kind of super hero time after time. until......[you fill it in]......

Knowing my luck it would be 6foot tattooed biker! And his horrible unforgettable words YOUS IS MINE FOREVER NOOOOOOOOO! Oh and his name is Bubba (get me out of my nightmare)

Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us!

Love you all! GREG.

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

What happened to the baby? 3 weeks and more without seeing her child?? Some parent this is!!