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Hypnotised to Quit Smoking Ch. 01

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by Anonymous01/31/09

not bad

but not good either. and the same idea you can find here, I guess at least 10 times, so it's also no very new.

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by digdaddyrich02/03/09

I like stories on mind control

Especially when the little girl gets persuaded in to sex. I'll be watching for next weeks session when he fucks her. thanks for the post....Rich

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by Wind7sailor06/14/10

Nicely done: a Guy's fantasy told from the woman's perspective

Just finished your story and I really liked the way you portrayed how the Kate felt, both struggling to understand how her body could be carrying out John's suggestions, while she personally didn't want to do so. Well done and I'm on to you next chapter.

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