All Comments on 'Calli's Interest Payment Ch. 02'

by dirtwrench

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
So far all he has done is controlled her orgasms

I wonder just how far is he willing to push his neighbor and long time friend into the slave/master fetish that evidently she is wanting, and his long time lust and love for her will be what she will use to get what she wants. Telltale marks of abuse on her body will be proof to her husband that she is cheating on him. A stretched pussy and asshole will be one of the first sign that he would notice, along with how sloppy wet her pussy is when he fucks her using a condom for birth control. I would like to see her become pregnant by her master, and he should demand that she deliver him an offspring. That could make for even more degradation and control for her master. But of course she would wind up controlling him with her pussy, and he the so called master is infact the one who is really the slave. Thanks for the good chapter, it's very well writen and expressive....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Expansion

It would be interesting to expand the knowledge to the two spouses, then the Master could properly collar his slave Calli.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Master?

Any woman brain dead enough to get into this deserves what ever bad happens to her, as for her so called master, hope he gets plowed under a Iowa cornfield with a stock of corn growing out his ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Friend

Hope he dies with his boots on and soon, so is no better. Didn't find this erotic at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Such a simplistic story

There is a major flaw in this presumably romantic story, that is the wife is not any smarter than all the other cheating slut wives. Her deception will be found out by her family and then comes the retribution on she and Doug. Probably will be the first sign is her cum crusted panties or cum crusted jeans. Cheaters are almost always found out maybe Doug will shoot off his big mouth to brag about someone's wife he's banging. Or she will confide in her friends to make them envy at the supposed great sex she is recceiving outside her marriage. But they will be found out.

Rc68Rc68over 7 years ago
Hmmm

If I wanted to read Dom/sub garbage, I would have went to BDSM stories

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