All Comments on 'wholly to be a fool'

on this before because I really do love this form. I think you've executed it beautifully. Really well done (which is no surprise to me at all). I especially like the way you've woven the lines from the glose into your poem, not putting each on a separate line or even necessarily at the beginning of a line, but just fit them in where they work best. That gives the poem a very cohesive feel and allows you to fit the form to your writing style instead of the other way round. I think you might need a "to" at the start of line 6, but maybe not. It reads more smoothly to me with it there, but maybe that's just me. All in all, a wonderful glosa. It's a cool form, isn't it? :-)