All Comments on 'Nightmare'

to write this or to enjoy this

I really liked until the point when she started to enjoy it. That ruined it for me.

ignore the pissy moaners....great story.....pushed all my buttons.....dreambabydoll/dadeesgrl

Mostly everyone has them, the same way some ppl have other kind of fantasies. Most experts will tell you there is nothing wrong with that so please start acting your age and stop spamming peoples stories saying how bad rape is. Lenina your story is good, need perhaps to smooth a couple of edges but sound just fine to me and i wish there was more to it.

That ending did it for me. Nicely put together. Do wonder what will happen if she turns up on his doorstep when his present girlfriend is there. She doesn't seem the type to share a boy.