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Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10almost 10 years ago
Sexually enthralling

... Until the very end. I wish you had ended this story with him driving away from the hotel, thinking about her going up to that room, taking those panties off, getting into the shower, not alone, but with him alongside her. That would have kept me hard for a week. However, you chose to let him go to the office where he received news that a good man, had been fired because of downward market conditions, and a fat Neanderthal thought he was going to be the one to replace him. Our hero also thinks he has a chance to replace our fallen gentleman, but that waits for the next chapter I suppose. That is why this chapter only receives a 4 instead of a 5

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