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Concern for Pregnancy
I liked the way you showed the concern for pregnancy.....not really positive nor negative. It left a lot to the imagination. I'd kinda like to see if you did get knocked up or if you wanted to marry the guy and start a family.
The writing makes the story come alive
A great short tryst with two people who needed a sexual release. With the family type lifestyles that they both lead,I don't see any problems with unprotected sex. I really liked the connection that they made, and it seemed as they might have another go at it sometime in the future. Thanks for little jump start to my mind that lets me to fantasize about some of my neighbors....Rich
Not what I was looking for
I suppose you thought that was funny? Putting this story in the "Illustrated" category with a couple of crap photos as "illustrations?" As an erotic story, it was medium Blah. As an illustrated story it was an obnoxious tease. I won't be back for more.
Nice submission
The first commenter on this story sounds like a child. I don't expect the author to hit me over the head with graphic sex and x-rated pictures; the fine prose and cute pictures were nice, light touches that enhance a well-written story. An adult should be able to use his or her own imagination to add to the story. As to the first commenter, I doubt KarennaC cares much that you won't be back. Perhaps you should mature further before spending time on a site for adults.
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