homeIllustratedWarming UpPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Warming Up

byKarennaC©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by don8765402/04/09

Concern for Pregnancy

I liked the way you showed the concern for pregnancy.....not really positive nor negative. It left a lot to the imagination. I'd kinda like to see if you did get knocked up or if you wanted to marry the guy and start a family.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by digdaddyrich02/04/09

The writing makes the story come alive

A great short tryst with two people who needed a sexual release. With the family type lifestyles that they both lead,I don't see any problems with unprotected sex. I really liked the connection that they made, and it seemed as they might have another go at it sometime in the future. Thanks for little jump start to my mind that lets me to fantasize about some of my neighbors....Rich

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous02/04/09

Not what I was looking for

I suppose you thought that was funny? Putting this story in the "Illustrated" category with a couple of crap photos as "illustrations?" As an erotic story, it was medium Blah. As an illustrated story it was an obnoxious tease. I won't be back for more.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/02/09

Nice submission

The first commenter on this story sounds like a child. I don't expect the author to hit me over the head with graphic sex and x-rated pictures; the fine prose and cute pictures were nice, light touches that enhance a well-written story. An adult should be able to use his or her own imagination to add to the story. As to the first commenter, I doubt KarennaC cares much that you won't be back. Perhaps you should mature further before spending time on a site for adults.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Warming Up  or
More submissions by KarennaC.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel