All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girl'

Hot Damn!!!! Man, I was not ready for that...I swear that is one of the sickest, twisted, and nastiest stories that I have ever read here, on Literotica.

I don't know that you could continue, or even add to this particular 'chapter, but fuck, Michele, you had better damn well try!

This was an outstanding effort, and that ain't no shit. I not only gave you a five on the front, but I scored it a 100% as well. "Oh, my..." Great job!

The ending was a little surprising but not really in a bad way. I think for those who aren't into gay stories it might be a little intimidating but it was a great story. Very well written. You had a few redundant moments with the word disconcerting but otherwise it was great. Keep up the good work!

Thank God I came before that last surprise... LOL because that would've just ruined it for me. I am a female and I find it really hot with father/daughter fantasies, but this wasn't... it disturbed me :(

It was different. You really need to pass it through an editor first though.

A very weird story that needs some editing work. I found it sick and disturbing but I know others will find it highly erotic.

lol, I always love a good mind fuck and that was one. Fuck all those nay sayers...I loved your trick ending. It made a mediocre story stand out.

LOL. I had to read the ending twice. At first I thought maybe you confused your characters or something. It was actually pretty sexy, though. I know some are grossed out, but I think it's actually kinda funny! Right on.

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I wonder if the son is a Tight End. Yeah I know... shame on me.

It was unexpected, yes. But it was good. Obviously, from your other stories, a reader who doesn't approve of that kind of thing shouldn't read your stories.

But no matter, they're a bunch of ignorant, close-minded, jerkoffs anyway.

Humourous and unexpected ending to a fairly hackneyed storyline. Could have been more erotic if feelings had been developed. How did son feel being fucked for the first time etc. Think queers and transexuals and very feminine boys are delightful Much nicer than trying to be a sheep shagger

All through the story, I wondered why Daddy didn't simply slide his fingers into 'her' cunt, or rub her slit through her silk panties. And you never gave away where the child was being fucked. Now I know! What a nasty little ending! You little sly devil you! You never lead on that he was fucking his sweet naive little angel in the bum! lol WOW that was SO hot! I'm a woman who's into gay/father-son stories so this was quite a gem for me. =)

As a fan of all kinds of literate kink, I was very happily shocked when I read the ending. So much so that I had to re-read the story immediately to see if you had given it away at any point...and you hadn't. Not at all. Superb job!

Yet another straight girl that likes to see hawt men butt fuckery. With incest added to it, it gives it the extra zing!!

I wasn't thrilled about the ending, but I can live with it. I came before it "got there", anyway. Either way, I'd love to see you write a sequel, or two, even though it has been a while since you wrote this. Please, at least, consider it.

I loved this story! Would love it if you developed it more, maybe dad feminising and brainwashing his son to become his wife...

What the hell

Uh.. You got me.

Nice work Michelle. Now I don't know what is better, to be transformed into a girl or to spend all my time with taboo stories. Both options are lots of fun; can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep it up.

i have re read this story a few times now and would love to read a possible follow on story or more about what happens between father and son next

Dirty. ;)

Thanks. lol

PLOT TWIST!!!!! xD I loved it

You should really have a disclaimer on this, it's essentially an f-you to hetero readers.

After mommy died of a accidental overdose, daddy was depressed. Daddy had started to go to gay nightclubs bringing home young pretty transvestites. Most of these young gurls were quite beautiful.Tall, slender, blue eyes blonde hair. Many looked alot like my mom. Dad started using drugs and cross dressed to make extra money doing tricks. I felt devastated. How could this happen I asked myself. I decided to take action.I knew that dad was sad about mommy and started to blame himself. The young transvestites were using him extortion was used and they got daddy addicted to hard drugs taking pornographic movies of him with teenage transvestites sometimes they were under age. I had to admit that the young boys were virtual and very pretty as well. I watched the movies and my pussy creamed as the boys sucked daddy and he sucked and got fucked. Soon I found some of daddy's drugs. I had experienced using some before but where daddy got his drugs, well they were better than any I ever had. One night I was listening after using some of daddy's stash. Daddy was screaming for the boys to stop. Daddy was being raped and molested by a group of three transvestites . Daddy was sobbing. I had to do something. I found daddy's .357 magnum and dressed only in my lingerie and high heels, I told the 3 transvestites to leave or else. They complied and daddy was safe. "Daddy, are you alright?" "Yes princess Daddy is ok thanks to you". Daddy's makeup was smired so I redid it for him and he took care to change him pantyhose and pretty outfit. "There Daddy, you look much better I smoothed out Daddy's pantyhose and caressed his leg at which time is penis got erect."D Daddy I know you miss mommy why don't you let me help you get over her soon I was stroking Daddy's penis through his pantyhose he got excited and started breathing rapidly my pussy moistened as he slowly entered me don't worry Daddy I won't let anyone hurt you ever again oh sweetheart I love you so Daddy and rude me so slowly and gently caressing my vagina sopping wet I love Daddy so I couldn't stand him being abused I knew he wasn't gay it was my job to bring him back even though it was incest it was so right. Oh Daddy Daddy I love you so please don't stop please fuck your daughter fuck me hard Daddy fuck me good and hard. Daddy continue to cross-dress I guess he couldn't help himself we went shopping to the mall Victoria's Secret had some sexy things daddy wanted to trial I bought a few things for myself we got home and slithered into the silky outfits soon my pussy was moistening and Daddy's cock was hard we put on some movies of some young transvestites f****** and sucking each other lesbians were f****** them with their strap-ons they were screaming Daddy got hard he jump my bones I couldn't help it my pussy was soaking wet I love f****** daddy I didn't care if it was incest it felt so good Oh Daddy Daddy I know it's wrong but I love you give me a baby give me a child yes yes my daughter I will I'll give you my baby now now child I'll fill you with my sperm daddy filled me with his very little sperm again and again night after night soon I was pregnant with twins we were related we got married we left the country repeat the same one we had three more children I love Daddy so much. to dress he's going through sexual inversion therapy to be a woman. Now Daddy has luscious press long legs we've changed his name we named him after Mommy I just call him Mommy his cock is still there and work so well I love sucking and f****** daddy we continued for the next 10 years Daddy brought in young girls and had been transformed we made Millions on movies we have anything we want now but mostly I just love f****** daddy are twin girls now or 16 now Daddy has inseminated them they're incestuous lesbians who loves sucking and f****** it's never been so wonderful so endearing our extended family is in a protracted incestuous orgy almost every night. As time went on daddy passed away put in his memory we now have beautiful daughters transexual Sons with luscious press long hard cocks the enjoy sucking and f****** each other seems it become addicted to come.

Omg that got me soooo fuckin hot and horny. I know I'm a sick freak but I don't give a fuck. I used to love crossdressing as a little boy and I've fantasized all my life about being my own daddy's naughty little cock and cum slave. I know its wrong but good God it feels so right...

This was hot, but you should have made it more clear that the daughter was actually the son. It doesn't end up being a twist, but i feel like there was some missed opportunity by not mentioning it earlier.

Hope you pick up this story or some similar one again soon. Excellent stuff!

Love it. I hope this is a true story