All Comments on 'Love Letter'

by zeitgeist_the_clown

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Aww

Just tell her...

Lee ChambersLee Chambersabout 15 years ago
Very sad and sweet

A good story. Makes you wish there was more so you could see how it ended. Nice work and good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wow

That was so sad. I wish i was so lucky for someone to like me that much...you deserve to win!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
hmm...

I really like it, but I'd really like to see more! to see Rory tell her about his love.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
So sweet!

Oh please finish this! (Preferably with a non-realistic happy ending.) He seemed so sweet and adorably besotted with her. Not to mention sexy as hell.

I also loved the idea of writing her love letters into her clit. Something about that is so symbolically satisfying and heart-warming.

You're a very good writer! Keep up the good work. (please, for me?)

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