by zeitgeist_the_clown
A good story. Makes you wish there was more so you could see how it ended. Nice work and good luck in the contest!
That was so sad. I wish i was so lucky for someone to like me that much...you deserve to win!
I really like it, but I'd really like to see more! to see Rory tell her about his love.
Oh please finish this! (Preferably with a non-realistic happy ending.) He seemed so sweet and adorably besotted with her. Not to mention sexy as hell.
I also loved the idea of writing her love letters into her clit. Something about that is so symbolically satisfying and heart-warming.
You're a very good writer! Keep up the good work. (please, for me?)