by Dr_Impervious
I listened to your piece about the quickie, and adored the layered voices. In this piece...I found it to be overkill. The stereo affect was too loud...and too much. Three echoing did not work for me.
Hopefully the woman this was intended for though...loved it. In any event, I bet her Valentines day will be phenomenal!
You're a very gifted writer and a wonderful storyteller.
Hello there Dr. Impervious. Wow i'm amazed at your talent. You make me cum so hard. I'm 18, Blonde with Blue eyes and i'd love to have a chat with you sometime, I'm Australian too :) reply back to me if you'd love to have some fun with me! Olivvvvia@hotmail.com
i love all your stories... i came the second you said, "come for me darling." please never stop; you make me so wet. <3
OMG THAT WAS THE CUTEST AND MOST BEAUTIFUL THING I'VE EVER READ IN MY FLIPPING LIFE :DDD I hope one day to meet someone like you and hopefully "sounds" like you ;) lol
woahhhhh, this was so strong, my body just went into spasms when you kept saying "cum for me" over and over omg
i am bawling my eyes out. you sir are a POET! and TRUST ME a lot more girls fall for that than you may think. :) we love a balance of that mixed with your way of taking control ;)