All Comments on 'Valentine'

by Dr_Impervious

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
didn't quite work

I listened to your piece about the quickie, and adored the layered voices. In this piece...I found it to be overkill. The stereo affect was too loud...and too much. Three echoing did not work for me.

Hopefully the woman this was intended for though...loved it. In any event, I bet her Valentines day will be phenomenal!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well it worked for me!

Oh, my god! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Such a sweet poem!!

You're a very gifted writer and a wonderful storyteller.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Mm.

Absolutely delicious. Baby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hello

Hello there Dr. Impervious. Wow i'm amazed at your talent. You make me cum so hard. I'm 18, Blonde with Blue eyes and i'd love to have a chat with you sometime, I'm Australian too :) reply back to me if you'd love to have some fun with me! Olivvvvia@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
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i love all your stories... i came the second you said, "come for me darling." please never stop; you make me so wet. <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

OMG THAT WAS THE CUTEST AND MOST BEAUTIFUL THING I'VE EVER READ IN MY FLIPPING LIFE :DDD I hope one day to meet someone like you and hopefully "sounds" like you ;) lol

livimason434livimason434about 10 years ago

woahhhhh, this was so strong, my body just went into spasms when you kept saying "cum for me" over and over omg

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I JUST DIED

i am bawling my eyes out. you sir are a POET! and TRUST ME a lot more girls fall for that than you may think. :) we love a balance of that mixed with your way of taking control ;)

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